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Shameless author doing a shameless review! We are nearing the end of the 2nd volume. And I must say, even though there were some issues that came out, I really enjoyed writing this story. On a serious note, though, don't be afraid to give reviews cuz I won't bite. It doesn't matter to me if it's a good or a bad one. We authors only have this option to see our readers' feedback. Same with comments too. Peace!
I really like this a lot. Overall a great fanfic that you should give a read. There are only a few grammar errors, such as an uncapitalized “i” but it only occurs in one chapter. Also, nice
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After reading all available chapter so far, I can say that this FF isn't bad nor good. This is my second big reading of genshin FF ( first is journey through teyvat ). Tbh, VOL 0 or the so-called prolog was tbh very annoying to read and even a waste of time (to me), I can just recall that MC got killed during a big event - > he got along well with girls that's all. Personality wise, MC is unlikable (to me), story is heavily focused on comedy because of it's protagonists and with his light joke (he think it is), for a ex-sage/more than thousands y-old man being so childish is in a way impressive but also annoying to say the least. He is also pretty much sexual harassing most female character ( these so-called girls doesn't rly mind 'cause of protagonists-halo ). Anyways, as you can see I have a very bad opinion of this story MC, not that I'm asking for y'all to be like him, you can all try to read it then you'll understand. One bad point too is, too much character and they're mostly bland with just some very important characters that seems humanlike (a bit?). The plot seems to be a slice of life adding a kindgom building? Idk, not rly sure bout it, it's rly too hard to understand what's the end goal of all this. Another point that I wanted to talk about is, his fate system/gold finger (idk if there is) or smthg like that seemed to be pretty non-existent, it's mentioned only a few times in hundred of chapter. Anyways that's the end of my rambling bout this novel, If you have plenty of time to waste then go on, if not just put away to read it later.
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I don't why but this story just feels weird to read, i can't really describe it. The writing quality is good as is the background but it just feels off for some reason.
i wish for author make scene his girl went yandere because she talk to girl ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
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Dimensional merging had begun, and Li Bei's peaceful life was on the verge of collapse. Luckily, he encountered the absurdly overpowered, yet helpful, Hedgehog(Ciweimao) Novel System! As long as he role-played as a "bad woman" in other worlds and successfully messed with people's minds, he could gain power and steadily work his way back to a peaceful life. But how could one maximize the psychological damage? The answer: Max out the protagonists' affection, then chop yourself into pieces and serve yourself up on a platter right in front of them. The most elite bad women often use the most basic tactics! In the world of Honkai, Otto's beloved childhood sweetheart was reduced to cinders before his very eyes. In the world of Chainsaw Man, Denji's found family was turned to ash right in front of him. In the Previous Era, Kevin's most important comrade was transformed into a Devilman kebab skewer before him... In the world of Honkai: Star Rail, he made the Trailblazer commit an unforgivable sin and even personally kill the one he loved most. ...Wait a minute! Why does this manga even have me as a character?!
When I crossed into the world of Teyvat, I received both good and bad news. The good? I was blessed with a system. The bad? It was supposedly a "villain's system." "Bearer, what is your greatest desire?" the system asked. "Well... survival would be nice. Oh, and maybe collecting a harem?" "Granted! But first, you must fulfill one condition." "Which is...?" "During daylight hours, you must help elderly ladies cross the street and perform good deeds..." "Or perhaps assist Keqing with her construction work, or aid Ningguang in finding mora-producing floating crystals..." "And naturally, by night, you shall become a hero of darkness, upholding justice—" "Wait, when am I supposed to sleep?" "At your age, how can you even think about sleeping?" Puzzled, I asked one final question: "Aren't you supposed to be a VILLAIN system? Helping me become evil? Shouldn't villains be causing chaos and mayhem?" "Indeed! But consider this – I believe the Abyss Order and Fatui are actually the good guys. Besides, helping elderly ladies cross streets? You're actually preventing them from getting exercise and maintaining their health. Isn't that wonderfully villainous?" I couldn't help but applaud the system's twisted logic. And thus began the tale of a most unconventional villain in Teyvat.
Su Qing genuinely hadn't anticipated that his simulation process would be observed by the characters themselves. [Black Swan: Friendly reminder, everyone—while watching your own or others' simulations, remember to stay calm and composed.] [Firefly: Okay... Wait!! I'm the first one being watched? Aahh, so much of my dark past is here! Don't show it, don't show it!] [Himeko: The Kafka that Su Qing adopted was quite adorable as a child. How did she turn out so mischievous after growing up?] [Kafka: Heh, let's see who else has their fair share of questionable deeds from their student days.] [Silver Wolf: Laughing so hard, those two upstairs just started bickering.] After Silver Wolf's simulation: [Sparkle: Hilarious, now three of them are fighting upstairs.] *** Please support me on Patreon, where you can read a bunch of extra chapters, not just for this novel, but for all the novels I'm translating. I upload at least 2 times daily for most novels (meaning there are at least twice as many chapters on Patreon compared to here on Webnovel). https://www.pat reon.com/ThatGreatStuff
(Starting chapters are being EDITED and the system has been removed) Ender was a streamer, and creator in his life on Earth. One day, he died in a 'special' hardcore world of Minecraft after slaying Ender Dragon. The World had various mods in it, but what happened after changed his life. Waking up feeling refreshed, unlike any morning, with an unfamiliar yet familiar room he realized he was inside the bedroom of his fortress built by him in Minecraft Overworld. Feeling dread of being separated from his family Ender somehow maintains composture and embraces his new overpowered (Dormamu level) life. Then his journey began in Marvel Universe but with an unexpected twist. *Warning Mc is OP cause he is the main character and also gets married early to Milf among milfs. ***** I hope you like it. The cover was found on Pinterest. Minecraft belongs to Microsoft and Marvel belongs to Disney. Other worlds belong to their respective owners. Thank you for giving me your time.
Ryen, who traversed into Teyvat, unlocked a two-way portal to the world of Minecraft. Not only can he bring others into MC, but he can also activate various mods? Nahida: "If you want to get rich, start by chopping trees! Dig three blocks and refill the mine once!" Hu Tao: "Hey, piglins over there, why not try this new coffin? Crafted from pure obsidian—buy with confidence, die in peace!" Venti: "Hehe! Dvalin, stop looking for me; I'm worried the Ender Dragon might misunderstand!" Yae Miko: "Yaedo Publishing House is now mass-producing Draw Swords! Only 999 Mora each—an essential blade for duels in front of the emperor!" Zhongli: "From a rational perspective, this weapon called Barrett seems more practical than the Vortex Vanquisher." … Years later, the dormant Heavenly Principles awakened. Looking at the drastically transformed Teyvat, they could only slowly raise a question mark. “Heavenly Principles ahead, you are suspected of unlicensed flying within city limits and will be detained and prosecuted by the 73rd Security Bureau of Teyvat.” “You have the right to remain silent. If you resist with force, we will not hesitate to deploy Titan Iron Golems and aerospace carrier battle fleets.” ~~~---------------------- Patreon Advance Chapters: patreon.com/dreamer20
What if Prophet Gary is at least partly right, and the souls of the dead do indeed wander the Net? One such soul did the impossible and managed to slip out of virtual Purgatory. Now it lives in the body of a very familar corpo who perished in Cyberspace. ____________________________________ An AI reincarnator in a body of V. ____________________________________ Updates: Tue-Thur-Sat ____________________________________ ************************************ Translated from Демоны Найт-Сити by Луций Корнелий ************************************ ____________________________________ ************************************ Patreon.com/johnny_Z ************************************ ____________________________________
I've transmigrated to the Honkai World and became the future Herrscher of Ice, Kiana's cousin, Durandal's cousin, Ana Schariac. Hmph, I must become a Valkyrie aboard the Hyperion at all costs to survive! Come join the Ana fan club! Wait! I'm just a fictional character, not your wife! Players, you guys are so peculiar! Ah well, let's embrace the chaos! ***** Please support me on Patreon, where you can read a bunch of extra chapters, not just for this novel, but for all the novels I'm translating. I upload at least 2 times daily for each novel (meaning there are at least twice as many chapters on Patreon compared to here on Webnovel). https://www.pat reon.com/ThatGreatStuff
Bochang finds himself transported to another world, and upon opening his eyes, he encounters two Stellaron Hunters - Silver Wolf and Kafka. [Dating Options Activated.] [Option 1: In this moment... there's no more time for hesitation. Shout at Kafka, "Mom!" - Completion Reward: Randomly obtain the power of one out of twelve talismans.] [Option 2: Shouting is unrefined and may startle others. Instead, try gently saying, "Kafka?" - Completion Reward: Get beat up by Kafka.] [Option 3: As someone who suddenly appeared, perhaps you should act normal by expressing confusion: "Who... are you?" - Completion Reward: Unlock the Abundance Fate Path and gain a random Imaginary ability.] Feeling powerless, Bochang internally protested, What kind of dating options are these? Seriously, there's not even a hint of romance involved! However, it wasn't until some time later that the black-haired youth realized the tragic reality, that these supposed "Dating Options" were actually "Troublesome Dating Options." Watching as girls like Stelle, March 7th, and Himeko circled around him, Bochang thought, "I want to fall in love." Dating Options replied, "No, you don't." *** Please support me on Patreon, where you can read a bunch of extra chapters, not just for this novel, but for all the novels I'm translating. I upload at least 2 times daily for each novel (meaning there are at least twice as many chapters on Patreon compared to here on Webnovel). https://www.pat reon.com/ThatGreatStuff