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Review Detail of Hydration in My Beautiful Deviant Lovers

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Hydration
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Keep up the good work, big fan of your novels especially The Bored Immortal! One thing i would suggest is more character development and dialouge between characters even if it streatches the novel or chapter a bit.

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Thank you so much for the support đŸ˜ŠđŸ„° I often thought I include too many dialogues and that is why I sometimes consciously reduce them. But no worries, I am still in the process of making my novels better [img=recommend]