I was half expecting han to be a villian instead of treating him as his master? Like Han being self concious the entire time and letting things play out and he enjoys it since he's the main character and getting their attention so i was half expecting to Han wake up confused and some what angry that he slept with 2 of them(literally not sexually)

Confused? why is your first thought of "the taste of despair" is ntr? first thought i thought of is getting beaten to a damn pulp, manipulated, betrayed, fighting against an enemy he cant defeat and kills his lover or best friend and here you go with ntr

Absolutely enjoying the novel so far! Just wish it had more stable updates! If your able to message me i wouLd love to support the novel through patreon or donating so you can continue the novel i just love the premise of the story!

continue its too early to judge if the story is good or rather amazing but its definetly not bad. its too the extreme so i can see why people might not like it.

Is he gonna be a simple but calculative character if so i cant wait(similar to an authors pov0.

he cleaned his room so did he ever read the letters? i mean obviously it's someone that cares about him never really specified about it in the chapter before wondering if your gonna introduce later later in the story. Still dont know power dymanics or much about the world yet. Is it on purpose? are you going to introduce world building little by little like your doing now or wait until hes in the royal academy to have the intructors "teach" aka world build from there. like are there ranks for skills is there mana what makes a hero a hero, i hope the main character isnt superly righteous i mean hes supposed to unprincipled so whatever works.

You broke off from the cliche where the main novel starts way later, instead hes a year late it makes me curious how your gonna intregrate the main character with the protag or if your not at all? will the main character be a sideliner like in the shadows, or directly helping the protag, or maybe neither where the protag and the simple man barely rarely meet? since its a year later im honestly enjoying that

Her? or rather here? or you?

Honestly enjoying it so far! I can already imagine how this novel is gonna shape out with this simple average character and im excited to read it!

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Hmm, theres a lot to improve on this novel it has a actual pretty good theme but theres literally no world building from the start of the novel. we know nothing about the main character except being a demon the system is barely used(only for good karma)but it has such the potential for more the entire novel has potential to be more than it is. for r-18 scenes i definetly recommend you skimming through leveling through lust its very similar to this story but with the right characters and world building. The character themselves are very 2-d with no substance theres only literally one sentence dialouge throughout every conversation it seems superficial. It may seem like im shitting on this novel too much which i am its just i see the potential it could be other than that keep improving and keep writing and ill keep supporting!

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Keep up the amazing work! Ive only read till about 30 something chapters but i love the novel already. It just seems off though as the main character of his own novel he shouldnt strive to be arrogant but to be cold and calculative. he should know the characters habits skills moves the vital points of monsters events that are happening, treasures, characters likes and dislikes but it just seems like a snobby arrogant person for now. the world building is particular and the chapters feel rushed the main character is already saying i have to get stronger when he hasnt really done anything to warrant it. take some time writing the character dialouge add some comedic value even if it stretches the chapters a bit more.

Keep up the good work, big fan of your novels especially The Bored Immortal! One thing i would suggest is more character development and dialouge between characters even if it streatches the novel or chapter a bit.

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