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2023-07-27 06:41

The writing quality is very bad, readable at best. The logic makes zero sense, in one of the chapters, the mc cuts off his finger and throws it away, then cuts off another finger of a titan person and puts it against the stub of his cut off finger and then Bam! white steam comes out and it's his finger now (he was still a normal human here). The plot is all wrong, he mixes the Eldians with the other ones that I forgot the name of. And isn't there a limit to the years that a titan can live? he's treating it as if he's now immortal, ridiculous novel that shouldn't be read. Probably f@ke Re*vie8ws

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