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ShatteredMusic
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2022-03-14 04:07

Giant cliche, cant really become more cliche. Example: he goes to the market and finds a really amazing martial arts book and the guy selling has no idea how valuable it is, so the mc gets it for the cheap and the martial art stance isnt even creative, the first thing the mc does to practice it is just a horse stance

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DillonCS
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The guy explained he thought it was worthless cuz he just took it out of his attic, he just wanted a quick buck for it, and it was well explained that he didn't just pick up a random one and get the god book, he searched stall after stall and just saw mediocre or fake stuff, like a movement technique that strains your muscles if you use it, he was only able to see it because he simulated it with his ability, AND its in a paper book, people realize that things made with paper are basically ancient because of how outdated using paper is, if its older, then its probably a useless martial art it just adds up, and the names of the moves are obviously because its supposed to be from a clans inheritance, its in the name of it, an ancient clans inheritance, the name of the moves dont matter as much as the actual moves and thats its just the first martial art he will get over his entire cultivation journey which he will obviously get more

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