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Tousifp
TousifpLv133yr
2022-02-16 21:16

Hav u heard of Nano machine? ...............................................................................................................

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Duncan_Bartlett
Duncan_BartlettLv2

heard of who asked? it can have the same ideas but different execution

KissMehAss
KissMehAssLv1

Duncan_Bartlett:heard of who asked? it can have the same ideas but different execution
VerdantUtopia
VerdantUtopiaLv2

So good

Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4

wasn't that like dropped or on hiatus

Ainz_Bellfrost
Ainz_BellfrostLv4

I think it's already finished and even the sequel is already being translated.

Gojusensi_441:wasn't that like dropped or on hiatus
enuj_cionaig_4159
enuj_cionaig_4159Lv1

nano machine is much more op than this

l0nE_w0lF
l0nE_w0lFLv5

Technically Nano Machine came out in 2017, while this came out in 2016.

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5

yup

l0nE_w0lF:Technically Nano Machine came out in 2017, while this came out in 2016.
theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4

no, it continues on a different novel after he went to the future

Gojusensi_441:wasn't that like dropped or on hiatus
TheOmniAdviser
TheOmniAdviserLv11

name?

theyasuke_:no, it continues on a different novel after he went to the future
theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4

descent of the demon god

TheOmniAdviser:name?
Melon_Night
Melon_NightLv4

Are you dumb? this is a Chinese novel, how could there ever be a different execution

Duncan_Bartlett:heard of who asked? it can have the same ideas but different execution
Janmarkk
JanmarkkLv12

lol nano machines ending is trash

Duncan_Bartlett:heard of who asked? it can have the same ideas but different execution
Luckyboy13
Luckyboy13Lv6

yep.. though the ending is not satisfactory 😅✌️

ZYFULL
ZYFULLLv4

what do you mean? are you talking about the first novel that came out by the name of nano machine or the sequel descent of the demon god or both?

Janmarkk:lol nano machines ending is trash
Janmarkk
JanmarkkLv12

both havent you read it yet?

ZYFULL:what do you mean? are you talking about the first novel that came out by the name of nano machine or the sequel descent of the demon god or both?
ZYFULL
ZYFULLLv4

well i did read nano machine but i didn't finish descent of the demon god so i don't know the ending

Janmarkk:both havent you read it yet?
Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

An ending does not mean bad story though? Remember that the journey is more important

Janmarkk:lol nano machines ending is trash
Duncan_Bartlett
Duncan_BartlettLv2

Only read up to around 212 of the og novel

Janmarkk:lol nano machines ending is trash
Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv3

lol this came out a year b4 nano machine. curb ur racism

Melon_Night:Are you dumb? this is a Chinese novel, how could there ever be a different execution
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