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ShatteredMusic
ShatteredMusicLv42yr
2022-03-14 04:07

Giant cliche, cant really become more cliche. Example: he goes to the market and finds a really amazing martial arts book and the guy selling has no idea how valuable it is, so the mc gets it for the cheap and the martial art stance isnt even creative, the first thing the mc does to practice it is just a horse stance

Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain

Eight O'clock At Night
3.3
1781 Chs

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DillonCS
DillonCSLv4

The guy explained he thought it was worthless cuz he just took it out of his attic, he just wanted a quick buck for it, and it was well explained that he didn't just pick up a random one and get the god book, he searched stall after stall and just saw mediocre or fake stuff, like a movement technique that strains your muscles if you use it, he was only able to see it because he simulated it with his ability, AND its in a paper book, people realize that things made with paper are basically ancient because of how outdated using paper is, if its older, then its probably a useless martial art it just adds up, and the names of the moves are obviously because its supposed to be from a clans inheritance, its in the name of it, an ancient clans inheritance, the name of the moves dont matter as much as the actual moves and thats its just the first martial art he will get over his entire cultivation journey which he will obviously get more

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Holla_signore
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ah yes, he has advanced optical brain, too bad his brain is inherently rotten, it can't be saved by any cheat and thus requiring literal divine intervention (called author's stupid plots) to save him.

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DillonCS
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I know that the setting is like Nano Machine but he doesn't actually have a system, its just that he got the abilities from an A.I and has super perception type stuff, its not as overpowered as it seems and its actually really entertaining. The world building and martial arts are extremely similar to Super Gene, besides the other world part of it, the technology and the way humanity is across the galaxy is similar, and the martial arts of super gene are easily some of my favorite in the way its portrayed and explained out of most of any of the novels I've read, this definitely has the potential to be one of the greatest novels on this site I highly recommend. There are a few typos or confusion of if something "is" or "is not" but it happens like once every third or fourth chapter and is very ignorable, no nationalism or anything, I really hope this one gets picked up.

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Vanaxity
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Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain is a story about Chu Nan, a completely mediocre student who decided to become below-average due to useless pride/stubbornness. Luckily, God (the author) decided to save him by giving him an "advanced optical brain". This allows him to have very high calculative skills and a the ability to process this information extremely fast. I think I am genuinely becoming sick of reading Chinese novels in general. It's very obvious that there is a very severe lack of talented authors that write xianxia/xuanhua. Translation quality is mediocre. Theres many mistakes especially at the end of chapters. (3/5 stars) Story development makes it very apparent that the author only wants word count, nothing else matters. This novel incorporates two of the most annoying writing "techniques" that you'll find in these novels. First, repeating the same information from a different point of view, often taking up an entire chapter. The second is how every time the main character does anything, we are forced to suffer and read some random reaction of some random irrelevant special-ed kid who exists solely to insult the main character. Aside from all that, this story is rather directionless. The only goal is for the main character to get to a higher-tier academy. What awful and cliche settings. We go from school arc to tournament arc to another school arc. Seriously? Character design is awful as well. I feel like it's a waste to write another long-paragraph. We have the same cliche annoying characters as every other martial arts novel. (2/5 stars) World background is also abysmal. In sixty chapters, I don't even think that the author has mentioned the main character's family aside from saying he comes from a family of farmers. Aside from that, barely anything has been properly described. We are suddenly in a school arc with the main character making many improvements, and then thrown into a drawn-out tournament arc. In sixty chapters, aside from introducing more useless and cliche characters, as well as providing a very superficial understanding of the world, we know next to nothing. Very poor attempt. (1/5 stars) Overall, it's yet another novel where the author solely cares for word count. The only positives in this novel are solely coincidences that I doubt the author meant to happen in the first place. I give this novel 2.4 stars out of 5.

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hakddn
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Another CHINA number 1,china is supreme,chinese race is superior novel. japan/Europe and america are nothing but slave nation. for jesus Christ chinese people move on. what happen in wwII is part of the war don't blame japan to anything bad happen in your country is not their fault that you are weak in that time. i thought you are strong with exaggerated history like "romance of the 3 kingdom" like war lord lu bu kill 50million soldier. really? 50million?

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Nostre38
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MC just castrated someone for being bullied and wonder why someone wants him crippled... But the plot armor is strong with him, like many others novels in this website. I wonder why the characters (MC included) are braindead ?

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