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gille90
gille90Lv142yr
2022-03-07 00:49

love this kind of story. pokemon fantic + streaming + exploration + new world order/ invasion. This reminds me of some of those Chinese/Korean cultivation novels where dungeons pop on Earth. Except the MC is not a murder hobo. Also haven't seen any 'Young Masters'... yet. I also hope that the author doesn't make the System a main point in the story. It's fine at the start of a story, but it gets really old and repetitive really fast. The best use of a system that I've seen is in 'Mech Touch' where the MC uses it religiously at the start. But at some point, he decided to not rely on it at even suspect it of using him for its own goals. I'm gonna go to Patreon now to buy the rest, you've earned my curiosity.

Journey On Pokemon Island[Hiatus]

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