webnovel

Review Detail of Melpy in The True Demon King In AOT

Review detail

Melpy
MelpyAuthor2yrMelpy

I'll continue writing, but I hope people know, If I don't get tips on how to improve my writing, or where my writing is bad I will drop this book. And if people do actually give me tips, then I'll continue updating as quick as i am now. Since I can write chapters fast as long as I feel like it I can drop multiple chapters a day. Of course future chapters will be slower tho since i need to read up on muzans powers and the plot of AOT.

The True Demon King In AOT

Melpy

Liked by 11 people

LIKE

Replies12

3CNV7
3CNV7Lv23CNV7

Download grammarly and read other novels to see how they write.

lawrence_
lawrence_Lv4lawrence_

if you're not getting tips means you are writing good man

Melpy
MelpyAuthorMelpy

No, I know that I'm trash at writing, maybe not trash but I have lots of faults. Maybe I just have a inferiority complex, Never mind I'm definitely better than most writer on this website, but I still feel trash.

lawrence_:if you're not getting tips means you are writing good man
lawrence_
lawrence_Lv4lawrence_

Melpy:No, I know that I'm trash at writing, maybe not trash but I have lots of faults. Maybe I just have a inferiority complex, Never mind I'm definitely better than most writer on this website, but I still feel trash.
image
thewayofKABOOMMMMM
thewayofKABOOMMMMMLv13thewayofKABOOMMMMM

spoiler spoiler spoiler bruh, Eren can pretty much control the realm of possibilities he can tweak the direction the world is heading in if you delve into it, mc has already lost Eren is unbeatable in aot but Author of aot dropped the ball at the finale tho so I get why people haven't caught up on the fact

Dragonised101
Dragonised101Lv13Dragonised101

unless you spawn outta no where Eren will just make it so your parents or entire family tree never existed cause he would have seen how troubles some you would be and just kill off your ancestors

Melpy
MelpyAuthorMelpy

Kira did, his body was made by the system.

Dragonised101:unless you spawn outta no where Eren will just make it so your parents or entire family tree never existed cause he would have seen how troubles some you would be and just kill off your ancestors
VoteRat
VoteRatLv4VoteRat

Well if you want a tip slow down the pacing a few

luminous1_vanqu10
luminous1_vanqu10Lv4luminous1_vanqu10

yes you are

Melpy:No, I know that I'm trash at writing, maybe not trash but I have lots of faults. Maybe I just have a inferiority complex, Never mind I'm definitely better than most writer on this website, but I still feel trash.
image
Yuvraj_Rathi
Yuvraj_RathiLv4Yuvraj_Rathi

bro i think you don't understand the power of attack titan,It can only see the future and past by it's user previous memories but he can not change the past,If you do not believe me just search it

Dragonised101:unless you spawn outta no where Eren will just make it so your parents or entire family tree never existed cause he would have seen how troubles some you would be and just kill off your ancestors
Dragonised101
Dragonised101Lv13Dragonised101

he can tell previous attack titans what to do by showing specific memories

Yuvraj_Rathi:bro i think you don't understand the power of attack titan,It can only see the future and past by it's user previous memories but he can not change the past,If you do not believe me just search it
Bloody_Reaper
Bloody_ReaperLv1Bloody_Reaper

Где главы?

Melpy:Kira did, his body was made by the system.