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Interesting plot. The writing was decent. However, the pacing was dragged down with large dialogues. Though I suppose that's a preference of the author as he started off by telling a story in the first chapter. Details were scarce and characters were slightly hard to imagine (Then again I only read like 2 chapters so that's probably to blame) Anyway, this was a good read. Probably a slow burner.

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Yes dialogue > narration is my writing preference. My belief is that characters should be able to drive the story and manipulate the world themselves without much interference.