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Dehni_Olsen
Dehni_OlsenLv142yr
2022-03-12 15:18

The story and world has so much potential! I feel like the writer has so much that they want to say because they can see it in their mind. It’s so nice to join an adventure that is upbeat like this. The female lead has two names and that was a little confusing. So maybe a little more explanation on that. However I love her sound and smarts. I feel like she could outmaneuver all of them. My favorite character so far, as of writing this, was Roger. He’s funny and I feel like I can see him the clearest of all the characters. My one critique that I’ll leave is the writer jumps around a lot. I feel like more could happen or maybe more detail of what’s happening. The paragraphs were very short and would go from the characters eating at the dinner table to it being the next morning. And it would happen within a very short period of time.

Her twisted fate

Ekwonna_Irene
4.6
76 Chs

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Ekwonna_Irene
Ekwonna_IreneAuthor

Thank you🤲

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Dehni_Olsen
Dehni_OlsenLv14

I checked your books because I wanted to review. You’ve been so supportive of mine and I wanted to give back haha Then I saw that I had already reviewed one of your books hahaha so now I shall give daily stones and continue where I left off on this story. Cuz it was a good one!

Ekwonna_Irene:Thank you🤲
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Ekwonna_Irene
Ekwonna_IreneAuthor

Yeah, your review really helped me then, in getting my story right. Haha, I was really clueless then. That's why I want to be supportive to your story as a token of my gratitude.

Dehni_Olsen:I checked your books because I wanted to review. You’ve been so supportive of mine and I wanted to give back haha Then I saw that I had already reviewed one of your books hahaha so now I shall give daily stones and continue where I left off on this story. Cuz it was a good one!
1yr
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Dehni_Olsen
Dehni_OlsenLv14

This, straight up made my day! Thank you so Much!!🤍🤍🤍

Ekwonna_Irene:Yeah, your review really helped me then, in getting my story right. Haha, I was really clueless then. That's why I want to be supportive to your story as a token of my gratitude.
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Web_Novel_977
Web_Novel_977Lv4

Great story and very interesting. One can't get voted even for a second. Everything is so well and it deserves a 5-star rating👍👍👍 Great work Author🤗 Waiting for more updates

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Ekwonna_Irene
Ekwonna_IreneAuthor

Hi readers! Author Rena~ So I know, I left this book for quite some time now due to personal reasons. But that doesn't matter, because it is a comeback[img=recommend]. To my old readers and supporters, who I kept waiting, I apologize and hope you read this book with a fresh mind. To my new readers, please support me as you read.

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BeyondTheLaw
BeyondTheLawLv11

I must say, after reading the first few chapters, This grandaddy found the story intriguing. The plot is full of mysteries and dark secrets, and the protagonist seems to be fighting against her Twisted Fate with all her might. However, it's clear that her journey won't be easy as the secrets she's uncovered involve people of higher status, who happen to hold some power. Personally, this grandaddy believe the story could be even more captivating if it were to take a slower pace, allowing for a more in-depth exploration of the protagonist's emotions. By delving deeper into her psyche, you could really play with the reader's feelings and make the story all the more engaging. On the subject of update stability, this grandaddy noticed that you had started the story over a year ago but had only recently resumed posting chapters on a regular basis. Nonetheless, I appreciate the consistency in the recent updates, and it's good to know that the story is still ongoing. I must admit that these types of stories aren't usually my cup of tea. As someone who's more into Xianxia and Wuxia genres, this grandaddy was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed this one. I'm genuinely curious to see how our lil protagonist will fight for her freedom and will definitely keep reading, albeit at my own pace. Overall, keep up the excellent work!

1yr
Lydia_Siu
Lydia_SiuLv3

Love this story! It's even so interesting from the beginning. It makes me curious and wanted to read more! The only thing is the chapters are too short. But it's fine as long as the story is good. good work author! keep up the good job! 😁❤

2yr
jsjalchemy
jsjalchemyLv1

On a roll. I am invested in the relationships the female lead may experience! The dialogue can be cute and its heart-warming when it is. Chapters are decently paced, albeit a little short, grammar could use some work but nonetheless it does not impede readers from understanding what is going on. Story progression is smooth as well! Like it!

2yr
Haley_Barrie
Haley_BarrieLv11

😯😯😯😯😯🥺🥺 I'm reading this book, it makes me want to cry and I love it so much. Especially, the beginning of the chapter, it's a captivating chapter. Author keep updating, don't stop OK Good Job

2yr
Leahgisselle
LeahgisselleLv1

I love the start of this story, it has the potential of making readers curious as to what happens next. am enjoying this❤️ and would recommend everyone to give it a try.

2yr
yukides_
yukides_Lv3

Good read! Keep it up! I wish I would be a full time reader for this one! author, please update more frequently. I wish to see more from your side+

2yr
Dessy_Success
Dessy_SuccessLv3

Great story, very interesting but the chapters are way too short. About five your chapter should be made one. Apart from that I think the story is great though.

2yr
nandu25
nandu25Lv4

Chapters are very short for my taste but good grammar, attention to details is good...worth reading. .................... ..................

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