I must say, after reading the first few chapters, This grandaddy found the story intriguing. The plot is full of mysteries and dark secrets, and the protagonist seems to be fighting against her Twisted Fate with all her might. However, it's clear that her journey won't be easy as the secrets she's uncovered involve people of higher status, who happen to hold some power. Personally, this grandaddy believe the story could be even more captivating if it were to take a slower pace, allowing for a more in-depth exploration of the protagonist's emotions. By delving deeper into her psyche, you could really play with the reader's feelings and make the story all the more engaging. On the subject of update stability, this grandaddy noticed that you had started the story over a year ago but had only recently resumed posting chapters on a regular basis. Nonetheless, I appreciate the consistency in the recent updates, and it's good to know that the story is still ongoing. I must admit that these types of stories aren't usually my cup of tea. As someone who's more into Xianxia and Wuxia genres, this grandaddy was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed this one. I'm genuinely curious to see how our lil protagonist will fight for her freedom and will definitely keep reading, albeit at my own pace. Overall, keep up the excellent work!
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