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Stormonix
StormonixLv112yr
2022-02-12 18:03

as person who doesn't gives reviews that much i would just give a simple review. i like it and i enjoy reading it much. with almost all good pokemon fanfics either getting dropped, hiatus or not even posting anything i would like to give a review so that the author and the possible readers may know that this is good but i may have trash taste. dont drop author-san!

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Firehawk81
4.9
23 Chs

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Pwaig
PwaigLv11

You should read pokemon alternating adventures. BTw there are some big info dumps in the beggining. Also everywhere. But the story is good. Also there is an auxilary chapter for you if you forget everything. Slow pacing but good nine the less

2yr
Stormonix
StormonixLv11

i have already read that and its true that it has so many pokemon with nicknames that you forget which is which and a bunch of info dumps but i would like to have more pokemon fanfic that has a lot of chapters since there is not much fanfic with 150+ chapters and most dont even come close to 100 chapters so i just wish there is more and less drops

Pwaig:You should read pokemon alternating adventures. BTw there are some big info dumps in the beggining. Also everywhere. But the story is good. Also there is an auxilary chapter for you if you forget everything. Slow pacing but good nine the less
2yr
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lstreader
lstreaderLv14

A good pokemon fanfic. Writing quality is great and I like the characters so far. I can't wait to see how strong the MC gets in the future! My two main complains would be that the world building hasn't been gone into that deeply, and the readers are still missing many of the changes in the world compared to regular pokemon games or anime. For the next I just hope that the author developed the interpersonal relationships more, his connection to his family is a little lacking.

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ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageLv4

You could ask how, considering magic was different between worlds, but you see, since magic was mostly make-believe and worked on mystical associations instead of hard, cold rules, it was a surprisingly easy process. I just had to keep in mind what I was supposed to call and for what reason, and the entire thing basically built itself.

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mrobinson1990
mrobinson1990Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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rackthethird
rackthethirdLv13

More pls

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kyle_fallenheart
kyle_fallenheartLv12

Personally i am a big fan of Pokemon fanfics, admittedly they're hard to be done right but so far i am really liking your start on this new fic. keep up the good work. now enough about the compliments lets get do the review so the current 2 chapters so far. Writing quality - So far so good not many if at all any mistakes in sentence structure and spelling, everything is quite smooth and rolls off the screen, which honestly is a big accomplishment on this site haha :). Updates Speeds - So far so good once a-day (2 chapters currently for 2 days) Story Development and world background - I will group these two together since the usually go hand in hand in my opinion, Its Pokemon so just that gets a good rating to me, which direction it will go we shall find out. Personally i think the idea of a perfection seeking psychic in Pokemon is a really interesting way to go (personally i like aura too but its usually overdone), also the perfection seeking quirk is really interesting not many have done this before in any Fan-Fic. Character Design - Again a really interesting quirk of perfection seeking it shall be interesting to see how the MC develops and how he goes about training, his Pokemon and what his goal are and how he sets to achieve them. Overall great start i'am looking forward to reading more :) 5/5. :)

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nonexistent_re
nonexistent_reLv13

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Asura_Of_Gluttony
Asura_Of_GluttonyLv14

Amazing

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dodmark_666
dodmark_666Lv12

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mrobinson1990
mrobinson1990Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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