Personally i am a big fan of Pokemon fanfics, admittedly they're hard to be done right but so far i am really liking your start on this new fic. keep up the good work. now enough about the compliments lets get do the review so the current 2 chapters so far. Writing quality - So far so good not many if at all any mistakes in sentence structure and spelling, everything is quite smooth and rolls off the screen, which honestly is a big accomplishment on this site haha :). Updates Speeds - So far so good once a-day (2 chapters currently for 2 days) Story Development and world background - I will group these two together since the usually go hand in hand in my opinion, Its Pokemon so just that gets a good rating to me, which direction it will go we shall find out. Personally i think the idea of a perfection seeking psychic in Pokemon is a really interesting way to go (personally i like aura too but its usually overdone), also the perfection seeking quirk is really interesting not many have done this before in any Fan-Fic. Character Design - Again a really interesting quirk of perfection seeking it shall be interesting to see how the MC develops and how he goes about training, his Pokemon and what his goal are and how he sets to achieve them. Overall great start i'am looking forward to reading more :) 5/5. :)
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