Review Detail of joaos in Pokemon Hunter
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Suggestion: when developing the events of the story, avoid abusing the armor of the plot, as it makes it artificial and uninteresting. The journey and character development is sometimes more important than the goal itself. As an example of Sneasel's capture, the act was similar to Chinese novels in which the MC inherits some cultivation technique from the "primordial demon god", a series of coincidences that led to its acquisition.
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I dont get it. It wasnt a series of coincidences. He paid for information about the pokemon in the area. plus that example doest quite fit. You dont search for a ancient cultivation technique. You stumble upon it. i also feel like it would also be a better fit to compair the pokemon to a rare cultivation technique than an ancient one. Its a sneasel after all and not a mew lol
