I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it. 1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'. It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx. Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters. Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means. 2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former. Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level? For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one. 3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints. 4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him. 5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them. I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".
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Thankyou for the review , i understand that the grammar might be an issue in the book since English is not my first language. Regarding the other point however , Percy is two years elder to Ronan which is why his and Ronan's starting points were way different with Percy already having a massive level advantage over his younger brother when he went inside the cave of penance. Also after Percy suffered his heartbreak he trained like a madman to reach the heights that he did but Ronan still managed to equal him. I hope this clears your doubt. Thankyou for all the appreciation , and the constructive criticism , I'll work on my weaker parts and try to improve my stronger ones
