Review Detail of Aozora_Ai in My First Wives

Item: My First Wives
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I would not recommend this fanfic, because the story is so flat and there are no changes to Ishigami Yu and instead follows the original plot. Even having a system is a bit useless and actually ruins the story even more. Thank You!!

My First Wives

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I don't know if you want to reply but can I know how the story is so flat? I can understand a bit about no changes in my character and having too much focus on the system but I don't know how flat my story is in your perspective. I need some advice or criticism. Thank you.

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