*Previously posted on the Novels section* Undeserved 5 star review from a shameless noob author. Now I know this story isn't going to be some sort of masterpiece, but I at least hope that people are able to enjoy it. This book contains An Extremely OP MC who faces very few problems (the latter might change, the former is set in stone). The book isn't going to be too long, people might have problems with the ending, and last, I am open to any and all suggestions and ideas.
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HarΓ©m? Say no
No harem, most probably there will be no romance either, but the latter can change, the former is set in stone.
honestly, I hope you can add romance, kinda sad when you read a forever alone MC
somehow, the mc feels like a dark lord. he doesn't feel much about killing his past self and manipulating others and his old self was a little bit better due to the part he started interacting with Harry, Hermione and Neville first but the whole thing just go downhill when he starts training for more power it made him look like a mad man on a witch hunt. plus, the mc should slow down a bit and maybe shouldn't have taken too much attention in the first place which he does after killing his old self. In my words he is Reckless, Impatient, a little bit too manipulating and lack of emotion.
It reminds me of one of the Harry Potter fanfics on Draco Malfoy's twin brother who looks like narcissca Malfoy which the ending was bad for me because Hermione and him broke up and just become friend and he never told Hermione he saw what happen in the future even though he said he would tell her after her mind protection was good. overall I'm just trying to find a happy ending for MC with Hermione granger so don't mind my comments
