Review Detail of Nguyen_er_N in Naruto: Overhaul

There is usually at least one grammar/syntax related problem every chapter. The world background feels a bit rushed. Character design for main character is nice, others not so much. Story development is not that great. Spoilers: Konan randomly pulled from Ame to Suna with weak justifications and reasoning. Torturing Dan Kato part is unbelievable as he would never call an animal "Tsunade" even if it's that name. He would also not call his torturer hokage sama. You made an elite jonin turn into a civilian with his complete wimp mentality for torture that is...sexually alleviating?!?!? Chisaki being cruel is normal as he's just a child that wants revenge on and misplaced his hatred towards Konoha as a whole. The quirk is really badly used, as in he seems to have unlimited chakra to spread it hundreds of feet across an area. Have you even seen anyone release chakra into the environment? They get a sort of aura and it's never extending too far away from the body before dissipating or circulating back into the body. He has more chakra than Naruto and 8 gates Guy from how far his chakra can be spread without dissipating. Tsunade would not trust a young kid in a desert in a random cave. During the war, look at her interactions with the Ame orphans. Especially not after being betrayed by her most beloved. I could go on, but you get my point