Review Detail of KING_IN_YELLOW in Naruto: Overhaul

It hurts my brain to read this review! And you're being way too harsh, I get it if you don't like the way people talk in the fic, but does it really warrant a 1 1/2 star review?

and what? a lot of people in the review just spam 5 star without real reason as to why they give this fanfic a 5 star, and looking at the likes of my review it seems like a most of them have the same opinion with me.

1st - The "it hurts my brain" part, is a jab at how poorly crafted the review is. So your writing. 2nd - Good job evading my main criticism of you're review, of it being "It's to harsh", but I guess "and what" is the response to that. 3rd - To address the people 5 staring mindlessly, I agree with you, but do remember that the author putting this fanfiction out FOR FREE! and putting out needlessly harsh reviews might discourage the author from making more chapters in the future.

bro your comment got blocked because you said s***

Really? webnovel is getting worse and worse first the events now this hays.

Don't worry I got you, wouldn't want this piece of work to go unknown

is that sarcasm I hear?lol

Its XHentai bro:

listen bruv i dont know if you don't understand me but uh naruto in itself is very xianxia like my guy like with meditating and everything

i wouldn't even argue with you, cuz i feel like you didn't read the fanfic before replying.

yeah tbh i quit while reading the synopsis heh

Ok and if the author wasn't putting it out for free it wouldn't be as popular as it is and that's a fact. As harsh as this review is what they said is completely true and most agree with him. Sure he could go a bit more into detail but yeah what he said is a massive turn off for most, most people don't want to read some naruto cultivation abomination

but as I said does that really warrant a 1 1/2 star review?

You could argue so, the grammar is subpar and has more mistakes than my own and I'm known for my meh grammar back in the day. The nerf off the start also hurts the story the whole saying something happened and not showing could Also warrant it. The plot for the most parts pretty ok, the concept is neat, consistency of updates is good. But in all honesty if you want to be objective it deserves around there. Plus the whole cultivation vibes just really throws off so many people. And its not like naruto didn't have some cultivation elements but this story just has that Chinese xianxia feel to it in places.

Personally I might've given the story a 2 star if I gave an honest one

well, I was never here to argue about the quality of the fic anyway, but trust me I can. Seeing how this is going, I'm just going to say let's agree to disagree, I'm not in the mood for an argument anyway.

Are you special Ed? How is "will of the sand" xanxia but hiruzen saying the will of the fire isn't. Your just a huge hypocrite

when did i say hiruzen isn't like those elder is a sect? can't you see the whole naruto world is like those xianxa with the elder council and all but this fanfic make it look likea real chinese novel with young mastwr roaming everywhere.

i mean its the guys opinion its the internet why u gotta make a big fuss the guy left a review on wht he thought and justified it well enough and it balaces random people giving it 5 stars for no reason knowing very well this aint 5 stars