Review Detail of Rafael_Carmelo in Naruto: Overhaul

Item: Naruto: Overhaul
Rating: 5

Review detail

Rafael_CarmeloAuthor2yrRafael_Carmelo

Shameless author writing his own review ^_^. I'm here because of my friend, and I'm trying to make a Naruto fanfic. Any critics and suggestion would be very valued

Naruto: Overhaul

Rafael_Carmelo

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JutoLv14Juto

what does BNHA stand for?

2yr

Fryandika_LarungLv4Fryandika_Larung

Boku no hero academia

Juto:what does BNHA stand for?

2yr

JutoLv14Juto

ah thanks 😊 for the Life of me I can never put arbitration together whether I know it or not.

Fryandika_Larung:Boku no hero academia

2yr

AidenryuLv13Aidenryu

Harem? or not?

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

The way training works is not actually like in naruto. Unless you're using some sort of system, it should not work like a xianxia.

2yr

Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

This has xianxia elements? I was going to give this a read but that has me concerned, I really hope everyone doesn't act like this:

AnotherAtlas:The way training works is not actually like in naruto. Unless you're using some sort of system, it should not work like a xianxia.

2yr

Z7readerLv1Z7reader

I really like this story please don't drop this Cuz the storyline is so good ✨

2yr

Phase_MorningStarLv3Phase_MorningStar

Is there romance??

2yr

Chris2121Lv1Chris2121

Make him the kazekage rather than only fighting, it would make the story exciting if there is some kingdom building :) he is a reincarnated person from earth take advantage of it to make the village more better than konoha.

2yr