how did he live 1000 years without dying with this mentality. mc without a brain. mc acting with his emotions............................................... ..

I haven't read the book yet but the intro looks good, undying, op, system, reincarnation, system, herem, All in one book, am waiting for it to reach 60 chapter so I can start reading, I don't like waiting for updates

shameless author review..... am really grateful to all those who reviewed the book, thanks to you all, I put quite some effort and also experienced a lot of stress, I only have five hours each day to write and am writing three books at the same time, still I still try my best to update this book to satisfy my readers, please keep supporting me, I will make this book legendary! !

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I liked the plot so far, The characters are interesting, and everything about the systems is explained briefly though I would advise you to write the events more clearly or give slight hints about the facts in the first chapter, it will help readers to understand the concept more. overall I enjoyed your story. great work.

Hello hello,I thought it will be better if I left a review since I finished the first 5 chaps. First of all, your book cover has choosen perfectly. It's super cool and hot. That can attrack people. However, about the story I am satisfied. But I wanted to say won't it be better if you make your title as In A Mage World instead of using all simple spellings. I just got an idea like it make the quality to be law. I got an advise to share that the title should be like that. Your preference. ❤️ Keep going author...

I am writing this Because it's unfair that people gave it one star when it wasn't actually deserved ........... ........... Justices for the Novel

still writing this story? would love to know

nice story author is quite talented pacing is perfect character development is good too.

50 chapter preliminary review WQ: much to be desired for improvement, Google doc could help you fix most if not all errors, example you have a bad tendency not to space after a comma, shorthand I am or I'm to simply am, or you'll capitalize the first name but not the last i.e. John doe vs John Doe. SD: it's a slow build up that often times feels unnecessary. CD: The characters feel 2D, not really descriptive on their features. US: no real issues with updating. WB: it's laid out decently. Going out on a limb I see this is your first novel but it feels like you sampled other people's writings and tried to mesh them together, seeing as how this is your first novel it's OK, but when this story is concluded I encourage you to take some time and find your own style and build off that I've given this recommendation to a few authors and they haven't disappointed, so keep writing bud.