The grammar errors and the cringe is to much! .

One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye

Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.

From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.

The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.

I love this fanfiction. Maybe MC is too strong from the start, but I trust the author. The romance between Thalia and MC will be a challenge and slow considering the antagonism between Zeuz and Hadès and that between Thalia and Adès... I like this romance! I approve! The chapters are slow to come out (I think) but that's the author's pace so don't force him to write faster than he wants

This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.

Reading this was truly a terrible experience! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

dint .

The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.