I know it's your choice author to write what you like in the book but can please add normal romance I would love the main protagonist have both boyfriend and girlfriend.[img=update]
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I'm sorry but the early chapters are in dire need of a rewrite. The quality is awful, the descriptions are simple, no punctuation, and grammar mistakes everywere. Reading ahead, the quality gets better. But as it stands, the early parts are way too painful to read.
yo, the book is quite fantastic, you did good on the character, and the background details are nice to, but what really got my attention was, DUN DA DA DAAA "the fox" books with foxes are my favorite. love you, love your book, and I can't wait for the next book or the next chapter
This is more of a question than a review. I read many novels on this app and I just cannot stand bad grammar.Im on chapter 5 and i wanna ask if the writing gets at least a little better cause if not, then im afraid i will have to drop this.(im not an english speaker myself so i understand some errors, i probably messed up something in my review as well, but just cant stand first chapters)
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I read about 60 chapter, in the beginning its good, but the system explanation and the goddess part ruin it for me. The leveling part also not good, he cant get xp unless its stronger ruin it( she cant get xp from savage beast even tough she is a savage beast), also she is only savage beast but she can defeat essence lord( power scaling is off), no explanation about how normal beast advance?are they also have level?
I don't know what to say I'm just tired of yuri if the male protagonist got reborn as female and wants girls instead of men I don't mind but the main protagonist is a girl should she at least have some kind of attraction toward men . I really like the main character she is strong , smart and merclic but why is she only attracted to women and I feel all men in this novel is incompetent, dumb and perverts only think about pretty girls even the king of the beast country is incompetent and weak I don't mind yuri but at least can't you add both men and female love.
Ok, I love it To the Library it goes!!!
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This is a very good book you should be very proud of it. There a couple of errors in it but nothing that will take away from the story. Therr is not a lot of fox store out there so please keep going. I hope it will be just like ”reincarnated as a fox with a system” and just as many chapters but please if you do drop this which I hope you don’t please tell us.
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