Review Detail of WattsonSimp in Reborn as an Extra

Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it[img=Out of it]