So is the skill making based on the level so Level 100 = Skills or Depending on skill level need this many levels?

Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it[img=Out of it]

Cool

Also the story probably feels that way because of the fact that the Author's first language isn't English meaning, Great Job!

Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.

Two of the same chapter interesting

A bit bias from me. I love the story always wanted an actual crazy guy in my life.

Uhhh pretty bad, pretty bad. The first 5 chapters is just I am Saint of this so me strong. Omg me saint dragon? Me tell kill he kill wow. By the way this is a bunch of teenagers just like trying to kill each other day 1 like come on make it make sense.

Another thing you've written Esme way better than Alicia it just seems that you put more feeling into her character, I could be wrong but still. Alicia is just kind of there not knowing anything about him and he doesn't wanna tell her anything about his other persona while he supposively likes her. I understand that she might look at him differently if she knew that he was "Ralyks" but maybe just maybe that's a hint that she's not the one. They also have opposing views in the world she doesn't wanna be there while he feels fulfilled in that world. But yeah it just depends let's see how stubborn Rey will be.

Honestly it just seems like Esme is the one. Bias? Yes. Anyways hopefully the relationship develops with either because it's just looking really slow. I like the story though. Rey kind of unaware of female sentiment still literally left her while she was talking kinda messed up 😔

Interesting grammar there coach.

Did you mean"Rey" instead of "Reg"

Good Chapter 😌

Great Story man. Keep it going!

So it's not bad. The comedy it's just out of place and that makes it hard to read.

so uh the whole story is childish, it's actually extremely boring to read I don't know how this is trending but hey man it's just bad, like when you read a good book and then decide to read a book that you read a long time ago and you notice that it's trash like that.

You just pointed out that there is another player that has found another hidden dimension when there's 2 Billion players

Why did your writing style go from normal adult writing to a 14 year old teenager that just learned how to cuss.

I really like the story unfortunately I won't be able to read it for a while.