A very enjoyable read with a concept I really love. Only issue is that the novel has been super face paced and concise with you finishing a whole semester full of school, a midterm and a dungeon in 13 chapters. If you wish to continue writing the novel you should be aware that you are paid by the number of words that's why most writers have super long and very descriptive chapters with absolutely no substance.
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