As I’m writing this morning have only made through 6 chapters. I’m really trying to stick with it, but the MC seems soo bipolar that I’m having a hard time getting past it. The system tells him how to equip his class and weapons, but he chooses to pick up a brick to throw at the monster….. The story starts with him playing a game, trying to show he is a seasoned gamer, even had his loot stolen because he was too slow, and then when he defeats a monster and loot drops he asked the system what good is this loot? You just killed your first monster!! Loot is loot! Oh and then 2 months later his chatting with his system, trying to show us he is pro at this now The system calls him “master” and he asks the system to show him his status… “Yo system show me my status pronto…” Okay cool thanks for showing that he is a pro now, then the next moment he is fighting a monster, he sees the monster is getting closer but doesn’t move like his class “Assasin” Instead he decides to stand and hold out his arms and cast a shield spell… his “Mana” or energy is being drained, the system continuously asks if he should use his ability but he refuses saying his got this, he will do it on his own… But he just stands there until his Mana is depleted….didn’t even doge or try to circle it. Just remained there with his blue scarf fluttering in the wind…but luckily when his shield was dispelled die to lack of Mana a young heroin comes and saves him and the leaves. The MC is then there calling out her name like he knows her, just watch me so and so I shall prove to you that I am going to be someone. You don’t know her, she doesn’t know you, she didn’t insult you, she saved your life… it wasn’t like you had a fighting chance… you were going to commit suicide refusing to listen to your system that calls you Master… I can’t tell if he is mentally unstable or just mental…
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Please save reviews for more thwn 6 chapters lol. Especially with a story like this; everything up to volume 3 still, is the “tutorial” or the prologue for the greater story. The MC is supposed to be stupid/flawed at the beginning. Just bear with it until the end of volume 1, if you can.
Harém?
DelzGB:Please save reviews for more thwn 6 chapters lol. Especially with a story like this; everything up to volume 3 still, is the “tutorial” or the prologue for the greater story. The MC is supposed to be stupid/flawed at the beginning. Just bear with it until the end of volume 1, if you can.
I can't spoil it for you
Melshan:Harém?
Pushing “stupid” too far at the beginning can be a major turn off from a novel
DelzGB:Please save reviews for more thwn 6 chapters lol. Especially with a story like this; everything up to volume 3 still, is the “tutorial” or the prologue for the greater story. The MC is supposed to be stupid/flawed at the beginning. Just bear with it until the end of volume 1, if you can.
Sure, but I don't believe that's the case here.
ImaginationGalaxy:Pushing “stupid” too far at the beginning can be a major turn off from a novel
I plan to to stick with it, I like the concept, it’ just the refusing advice and choosing death, yet getting angry at your saviour makes the MC look a bit bipolar. If there was no advice from the system, and he tried with all his might but failed and then get saved, that would make more sense. Or if he actually listened to the system and had a chance at winning before she stepped in and ”saved” him, then his anger would be justified.
DelzGB:Please save reviews for more thwn 6 chapters lol. Especially with a story like this; everything up to volume 3 still, is the “tutorial” or the prologue for the greater story. The MC is supposed to be stupid/flawed at the beginning. Just bear with it until the end of volume 1, if you can.
That chapter was changed a few days ago. MC doesn’t get mad at Ma-Ri, nor does he acquire a desire to reach her level. After getting saved and seeing that he’s that behind, he decides to finally stop half-assing things.
CorvinCorvus:I plan to to stick with it, I like the concept, it’ just the refusing advice and choosing death, yet getting angry at your saviour makes the MC look a bit bipolar. If there was no advice from the system, and he tried with all his might but failed and then get saved, that would make more sense. Or if he actually listened to the system and had a chance at winning before she stepped in and ”saved” him, then his anger would be justified.image
Perfect!! Will start it from the beginning, just to change my own image of the MC in my head. 👍🏾
DelzGB:That chapter was changed a few days ago. MC doesn’t get mad at Ma-Ri, nor does he acquire a desire to reach her level. After getting saved and seeing that he’s that behind, he decides to finally stop half-assing things.
Alrighty c:
CorvinCorvus:Perfect!! Will start it from the beginning, just to change my own image of the MC in my head. 👍🏾
naw any girl he likes will die.
Melshan:Harém?
Tf? bro some of us like me hate harems so we won't read it if it's a harem... So please spoil it.
DelzGB:I can't spoil it for you
Do you see a harem tag?
Tunic01:Tf? bro some of us like me hate harems so we won't read it if it's a harem... So please spoil it.
80% of the time there's not a harem tag it still ends up a harem. So I always ask before I read
DelzGB:Do you see a harem tag?
Well, all I can tell you without spoiling is that if you think it seems like a harem at any point, trust me, it won't be lol
Tunic01:80% of the time there's not a harem tag it still ends up a harem. So I always ask before I read
Can you just say yes or no? Ain't gotta be all cryptic and shi😂 (A harem is anything over 1 fml)
DelzGB:Well, all I can tell you without spoiling is that if you think it seems like a harem at any point, trust me, it won't be lol
You really don't understand lol. In this specific story, "no" is a spoiler within the context of what happens. That's why I don't like answering that question. If you don't care about that, then no, there isn't a harem.
Tunic01:Can you just say yes or no? Ain't gotta be all cryptic and shi😂 (A harem is anything over 1 fml)
It doesn't change much in later chapters he stays stupid but at least he tries to train more.
DelzGB:Please save reviews for more thwn 6 chapters lol. Especially with a story like this; everything up to volume 3 still, is the “tutorial” or the prologue for the greater story. The MC is supposed to be stupid/flawed at the beginning. Just bear with it until the end of volume 1, if you can.
Define "later chapters." I don't think you've gone beyond volume 2, at most.
Earth546:It doesn't change much in later chapters he stays stupid but at least he tries to train more.
Is is true that anyone he ends up liking will die? I'm already feeling sad for MC after what happened to his friends.
DelzGB:Alrighty c:
Looks like author didn't understand anything at all. Dude if your type of 'realistic human' is like that, then you yourself is clearly mentally challenged. And what's with the prince in a white horse? looks like u didn't try to understand anything and just spouted some nonsense. If you're take on 'realistic human' is something like a dreg on society then I pity whoever taught u. Like I said, u portrayed the mc like a 40yr old unemployed creepy fat uncle. Go outside your house and find anyone who thinks about doing perverted things in a tense situation. Disgusting.
