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Scarlet_Feather
Scarlet_FeatherLv143yr
2022-02-01 07:47

When I saw Delz released a new novel, I already knew what to expect. Starting off, the pacing is perfect(not to slow or not to fast, it is right in the middle), and the grammar is A1. Reading novels with choppy grammar is horrible, and really ruins the reading process( for me at least), so reading a novel with great grammar is super refreshing. The characters, systems/powers, and enemies are very engaging early on. When you finish reading this, I recom mend you readers to check out Garden of the Abyss, another one of Delz’s novels. Be warned readers, only read Gareden of the Abyss if you enjoy peak fiction;). All in all I’m ready to see the the future of AOANN!

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

DelzGB
4.7
258 Chs

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Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

I almost couldn't tell if you meant this book or GOTA, I died laughing xD

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Scarlet_Feather
Scarlet_FeatherLv14

The story is also very relatable; I mean I for one wouldn’t want to die a virgin.

3yr
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Arimas_left_nut
Arimas_left_nutLv10

Thanks for telling us about Garden of the Abyss. I’ve binged all the way up to the locked chapters. Bottom line is that I want more

3yr
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Jimmycalzone
JimmycalzoneLv10

I have recently some read Garden of the abyss and have to say the it’ s pretty great.My favorite character so far is definitely Lucas. I can’ wait to see I’m evolve on.

3yr
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

is this a harem

2yr
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Waterman
WatermanLv2

Does eunji actually die?

2yr
SonofSunWukong
SonofSunWukongLv15

Grammar is NOT A1, there r quite a few mistakes and inconsistencies

2yr
Scarlet_Feather
Scarlet_FeatherLv14

Considering it’s a novel on this app, it definitely is A1. I never said it was perfect lol

SonofSunWukong:Grammar is NOT A1, there r quite a few mistakes and inconsistencies
2yr
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Reveal spoiler

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MAIDENLESS
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Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *

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LemonDrop124
LemonDrop124Lv11

mc is pretty relatable so far, though this review is made when there are around 3-4 chapters so keep that in mind. There is some pretty heavy gore at the start, so if that's not your thing then yeah. If it is, have fun lol. I like that everybody is included in the system, it kind of gives me sao vibes.

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Rivel_Emerald
Rivel_EmeraldLv15

Time of writting review: 130 chapters in. 1. Writing quality: Thus far, I havnt noticed any jarring errors. Author has a good sense of grammer, and the way he writes is very descriptive. I can truely picture whats happening in the moment when I read. 2. Story development: I feel like the story isn't moving too fast or too slow. We have time to grow attached to characters, and the state of the world. Yet the story continues forward bringing change, not growing stale. 3. Character design: Alot of the characters feel unique in their own way, whether its personality or powers. The MC is not static, he develops his personality at a good pace and grows. (unlike a certain novel I dropped where the Mc is still hyper innocent and niave 700 chapters in... yeah that got old lol). 4. Updating stability: No complaints here, so far author releases a good 1-2 chapters a day which is pretty impressive. 5: World background: I just wanna say, wow! I have read alot of novels, and can't quite recall a premise like this. I am very fond of the lore/background that has been built up, and can't wait to see the secrets that the mc unveils late in the story. (Sure there are *some* elements in the story that have been introduced in other novels, but this is a refreshing blend) Definitely a very unique system novel. I would recommend you read this, as it is criminally under rated.

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mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15

Reveal spoiler

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Ben_Browningham
Ben_BrowninghamLv10

Everything about this novel is pretty great. I’d have to say it’ s a top tier novel including great grammer and everything else you could want. If this does not win 1st place, something is rigged

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Joe_flow
Joe_flowLv10

Everything is great so far . Plus it’s a harem, what more do I have to say. Even more the girls actually have a personality which is rare among this genre

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Andrew_Endlich
Andrew_EndlichLv1

Another masterpiece by Delz, exquisitely crafted with clear mastery of writing. The world is built with expertise and the characters are very charming.

3yr
DiziWizi
DiziWiziLv1

Good story very cool I like that the story is based in an MMORPG type setting, just like the critically acclaimed MMORPG Final Fantasy XIV! With an expanded free trial which you can play through the entirety of A Realm Reborn and the award winning Heavensward expansion up to level 60 for free with no restrictions on playtime!!! I also like that the MC is a "kissless virgin", an obvious self insert of the author.

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