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Scarlet_Feather
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2022-02-01 07:47

When I saw Delz released a new novel, I already knew what to expect. Starting off, the pacing is perfect(not to slow or not to fast, it is right in the middle), and the grammar is A1. Reading novels with choppy grammar is horrible, and really ruins the reading process( for me at least), so reading a novel with great grammar is super refreshing. The characters, systems/powers, and enemies are very engaging early on. When you finish reading this, I recom mend you readers to check out Garden of the Abyss, another one of Delz’s novels. Be warned readers, only read Gareden of the Abyss if you enjoy peak fiction;). All in all I’m ready to see the the future of AOANN!

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Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

I almost couldn't tell if you meant this book or GOTA, I died laughing xD

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Scarlet_Feather
Scarlet_FeatherLv14

The story is also very relatable; I mean I for one wouldn’t want to die a virgin.

Arimas_left_nut
Arimas_left_nutLv10

Thanks for telling us about Garden of the Abyss. I’ve binged all the way up to the locked chapters. Bottom line is that I want more

Jimmycalzone
JimmycalzoneLv10

I have recently some read Garden of the abyss and have to say the it’ s pretty great.My favorite character so far is definitely Lucas. I can’ wait to see I’m evolve on.

Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

is this a harem

Waterman
WatermanLv2

Does eunji actually die?

SonofSunWukong
SonofSunWukongLv15

Grammar is NOT A1, there r quite a few mistakes and inconsistencies

Scarlet_Feather
Scarlet_FeatherLv14

Considering it’s a novel on this app, it definitely is A1. I never said it was perfect lol

SonofSunWukong:Grammar is NOT A1, there r quite a few mistakes and inconsistencies
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