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EspaguetiGOD
EspaguetiGODLv33yr
2022-03-26 10:06

wow, it started so well, but he didn't have to get carried away by the opinions of people who have known self-love in their lives, what was the need to totally change the focus of the story and the character of the MC, lower the level of the work and reduce it to capture all the gaps you see, literally turned this from a decent novel, to an empty generic work and more of the lot. What a disappointment, if only he had stuck to his idea and kept everything in 2-3 girls, he could be saved, but no, all because the author seems to notice a personality or his own criteria.

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Emanuel_Alegre
Emanuel_AlegreAuthor

Puede ser. En algunos casos extraño como iba a ser la idea original.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Desde escogio ser un lame botas de Hermione, la historia estaba perdida.

AdolfH
AdolfHLv1

To the reviewer: "Gaaaaaaaaay... For the novice cuckolds who can't stand what every real male wants"... To the review commenter: "How much did the inflatable doll cost you? (Somehow it needs sexual contact, albeit with plastic)"...

EspaguetiGOD
EspaguetiGODLv3

AdolfH:To the reviewer: "Gaaaaaaaaay... For the novice cuckolds who can't stand what every real male wants"... To the review commenter: "How much did the inflatable doll cost you? (Somehow it needs sexual contact, albeit with plastic)"...
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Yo no tengo problema con el harem lo que me molesta es que el autor más adelante lo convierte en un psicópata o yandere que quiere a las chicas que quiere incluso quiere forzar a todos incluso si ellas no quieren lo cual me parece repugnante

AdolfH:To the reviewer: "Gaaaaaaaaay... For the novice cuckolds who can't stand what every real male wants"... To the review commenter: "How much did the inflatable doll cost you? (Somehow it needs sexual contact, albeit with plastic)"...
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