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Abysalyounglord
AbysalyounglordAuthor3yr
2022-03-17 10:05

Hey everyone, please don't take it to heart as I am not gonna keep the reviews rating below 4, so if you find this is not your cup of tea then then please don't bother with the review. Only give review if you find it to your liking as I already explained myself in the synopsis itself so read that first and tags below in it. Thank you

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LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

did he take Arata's place? or he will steal girls from him before Arata even have a chance? I'd prefer if it was the first case.

0vrLrd71
0vrLrd71Lv5

Did you change your mind on the Harem? there isn't a tag there?

Zekril
ZekrilLv4

Hooo You think you can stop me Author-san?

Fruitful_Gaming
Fruitful_GamingLv13

Imagine rejecting anything below 5 stars, kinda cringe my guy, tell me would you still delete the 4 star review even if it had constructive criticism?

Abysalyounglord
AbysalyounglordAuthor

no, not the four star ones but below that

Fruitful_Gaming:Imagine rejecting anything below 5 stars, kinda cringe my guy, tell me would you still delete the 4 star review even if it had constructive criticism?
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Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15

Is this still a harem cause idont see harem tag but the title is still the same so it is confusing

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Why? I get deleting a 1 star that just says Trash repeatedly but if i gave you a 2 or a 2.5 or maybe lower like a 1.5 but gave valid reasons for my score and added some constructive critisms would it still be deleted? In that cause then you as an individual just arent made out to be an Author. How can you learn if you arent willing to put up with the criticism?

Abysalyounglord:no, not the four star ones but below that
Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4

What’s the moral alignment of mc

Abysalyounglord
AbysalyounglordAuthor

Chaotic Neutral

Uncertainty:What’s the moral alignment of mc
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv10

just saw the update I'm glad your back with an new arc as well

Argelicano309
Argelicano309Lv12

Autor puedes hacer una novela de animes combinados ¡por favor! El tema principal sera animes combinados. Talvez un sistema auxiliar para ayudar.mundos War is love, High school Of Death, KissXKiss, las Quintillisas, el anime de cocina de nivel dios donde aparece Irina, talves un mc tipo macho alfa, nada beta. Harem, Ecenas +18 pero no frecuentemente, ya sabes como lo haces tu. Que se enfoque más en el romance y el fondo del mundo y su trasfondo.

Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15

Quaser no stigmata is a good anime that hasn’t been used I think Plus bunch of waifus that have breast milk and are not even pregnant is great

No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

The difference between a child and an adult. The adult takes the Bmail from customers for giving the burn food and grows to make better food. A child takes the report card with 3 Fs , 1 A, and hides it so no one can see the failure .

Crimson_King:Why? I get deleting a 1 star that just says Trash repeatedly but if i gave you a 2 or a 2.5 or maybe lower like a 1.5 but gave valid reasons for my score and added some constructive critisms would it still be deleted? In that cause then you as an individual just arent made out to be an Author. How can you learn if you arent willing to put up with the criticism?
No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

I honestly read the 3 stars and below just so I can get a realistic pov of the story and what are the most negative aspects

Abysalyounglord
AbysalyounglordAuthor

I don't mind if It's honest review but if someone talking With their assess then It's problem for me.

No_1_islookin:I honestly read the 3 stars and below just so I can get a realistic pov of the story and what are the most negative aspects
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