until the recent chapter you can notice the progress, it is not so fast the romance, since it is approached slowly, it would be good also that you make "pov" of the 7 "trinities". I can't say more until more chapters come out, that could show their progress with their training and the girls.
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This is my first work so I am still inexperienced and also I have a problem with romance drama plots as you can see that's how it came out. By the way thanks for the advice , I need others opinions on the matter so I can know which part I improve...🤗
just something else(make a chapter 0 or auxiliary where you put the evolution of the protagonist with his powers, the power rank of that world, the list of the girls who appear so far, a little of what world is this, not for me, but for those who do not know the novel or the anime, among other things that surely someone will put in the comments saying(and how are the girls , in what scale is the protagonist, etc ))
Thanks for your opinion I will do that when I get the time in a few days later.
How big the hárèm going to be ?
you should add harem tag
why should it be placed that the title is already a harem overlord.
people search novel based on the novel tag duh
I never searched through tags, better write down specifically the world title, after all titles have the word harem.
