story is too long winded. that is my main problem with it. at some point you pay for 10 or 20 chapters and maybe a day or two pass in the timeline that is too slow paced especially if you expect me to pay for each chapter. he build a nice house for himself, thats fine, but was it nessecary to spend 7 chapter describing it? and then another 2 for his sisters POV+ 1 cahpter moving in? 10 chapters, 60-70 coins, for what? the he starts getting involved in music and now you can enjoy a dedicated chapter at least for each instrument he masters(he has grandmaster lvl skill for that so he only needs to practice a little to improve drastically) this was not nessecary just tell us he practiced those instruments and move on etc. etc. 8 chapters on the first day of interviews for his anime studio(chapter 120-128), most of these employees will be forever name and faceless why spent so much time on that? then there is the 2nd 3rd and 4th phase of interviews so buckle up. the studio opens in chapter 225 by the way. to be fair this is not all just interview they are also starting to produce their first anime, there are a lot of slice of lif parts which are fine and he is producing an album where almost everything is micromanaged which too is too long winded. its still a good story though. i would give it 4 stars if it wasn't for the unnessecary length.
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