For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem* Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.

The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries

How can anyone even like this? The main character is a complete loser. Honestly disgusting to read. Had to force myself into reading a chapter. Simp MC

The story has a lot of potential, but it is wasted in a easily evitable way. The most common problems are: - LOL. - The author explain as something work just to forget it and making it work in a different way. - Irrealistic or dumb plot device (alert minor spoiler, jump to the next point if you don’t want know: an explosion that erase 75 square km of the city where the mc is, but he says he doesn't know anything because he didn't watch the news and he was at a friend house, friend that previously he said was in the same city. To not add that even though the explosion happened in a residential district there were just 67 deaths). - Expression used in the wrong way. Although I may sound harsh (both here and in the comments) I don't want to offend the author, but just point out thing that in a much needed rewrite should be corrected. As said before the novel has a lot of potential and it sadden and annoy me to see it wasted. I hope to not have offended or upset the author with this review or my other comments.

Good villain novel with an mc that does what he wants without caring about others feelings. So far the plot has been exciting, writing quality is good, updates stable, charas maybe need a little more depth but its fine as is.

Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy. Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously. The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has. I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.

please stop saying lol when they talk. They're not texting its real life. at least do haha. that makes it so much better already.

Ngl I didn't expected much from this kind of premise but you did a good job delivering the story. Also tbth I think this one is better than your first book, you're improving and I, who has read both of your works, love to see you developing so great job. The characters' are still being introduced but I like Sam, he gives me Klaus vibes from the originals and I f'king love it! The world is being set up and you're doing a good job keeping your readers guessing. I don't have much to say about development right now but I think the story is heading somewhere, somewhere I would like to see so good luck writing. There aren't many villain stories. I mean there are story about bad guys, but not villains you know, the kind of people you'd love to read about but hate to meet in real life, Sam is that kind of villain. He calls his murder 'hunt', he talks to the dead body of people that he had killed. He is twisted in the head and I like it so good luck writing him. 4.8 stars for now, I will recommend this to some of my friends too.

I hate to say it but the main character is a simp. Instead of making her fall in love with him, why does he act like the inferior and goes to mess with that other man. I think she doesn’t like him because he is too nice to her that caused her to Friendzone him. Like the saying goes in order to capture one must let loose. He should never show that he likes her or she will feel less interested. Simping=Death