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shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv43yr
2022-02-21 10:52

I give up at chap 30/35. like bruh the details the details is important. this Chinese novel has a potential really but it seems that iits either the translator/editor has no supporters/underpaid or he/she did not watch naruto at all. like he translated the story edited the grammar and thats it. he/she forgot an important part when it comes to chinese fanfic and that is the terms and words they used. ALMOST all translated chinese fanfic in webnovel is trash because of it. you know what? I give up good luck in this fic hope you re-edit it while its still has 35 chapters

Naruto: Gate Of All Dimensions

Flame_Spirit
4.4
113 Chs

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Pinguinmonster
PinguinmonsterLv14

Apparently not a translation from a chinese novel, but the authors original fanfic work

3yr
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shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

well s**t thats even worse.

Pinguinmonster:Apparently not a translation from a chinese novel, but the authors original fanfic work
3yr
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AshbornKRAVKE
AshbornKRAVKELv10

Oohhh, I am not gonna read this.

Pinguinmonster:Apparently not a translation from a chinese novel, but the authors original fanfic work
3yr
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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

true

2yr
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whitecrow
whitecrowLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr

Semuel_Set
Semuel_SetLv1

this fic very similar as Naruto: the law of the devil ( MC orphan, "son" of Nana Yakushi, don't like kabuto, shisui friend, also beat izumo and kotetsu, and between Lilit and Devil from Law more same things than i think. (Same awaking, dialoge (but different power), and price for abillity,)

3yr
Flame_Spirit
Flame_SpiritAuthor

Author here~ please feel free to criticize and give suggestions how I can improve. Thanks for reading @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

3yr
MidnightBlade007
MidnightBlade007Lv4

A well written fanfic, not at all rushed. The plot, characters are all well developed. Little to no grammar mistakes. Hope you increase the update stability and don't drop it.

3yr
Gotha
GothaLv14

Well... the idea is not bad... but seriously author? It seems like you have read way too much cultivating novels, the characters behave like they are straight from those cultivating novels and has lost the "Naruto" vibe and there are way too many plot holes.

2yr
Nix_Phoenix
Nix_PhoenixLv1

anyway you know how to surprise you're reader I mean I thought of a lot of power but Ignir escaped me: Fire dragon slayer, Demon slayer or fire god, lineage Bune(DxD), Incinerate Anthem (DxD), Johnny Storm / Human Torch (Marvel Comics), John Allerdyce / Pyro X-Men, Phoenix Lineage (DxD), Nuova Shenron (Dragon Ball GT), Genryusai Shigekuni Yamamoto's Ryūjin Jakka (Bleach), The Sun rising of Feitan (Hunter x Hunter) , the Quirk - Cremation of Dabi (My Hero Academia) , the powers of the Phoenix Force (Earth-616) | Marvel, The Powers of Zarathos (Earth-616) Marvel.... in short among all I did not even imagine The fire dragon Ignore congratulations and thank you for the chapter

3yr
Kenny3408
Kenny3408Lv14

I like the story keep it up. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Mstrvin
MstrvinLv13

A great read so far, waiting for more updates in the future . Hope author will pick this up again and continue where he left. Looking forward.

1yr
KonanThaUchiha
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