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EternalEden
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2024-01-15 11:09

While this is a pretty good story and can be used to pass the time, the writer insists on throwing in rather cringey moments to try and force a laugh. On top of that, they ignore their own rules and set up the most ridiculous situations in order to push the plot forward. An enemy comes and fights against someone way stronger than him, and the enemy escapes anyway. Then they fight against someone an entire cultivation REALM ahead of them and still escape anyway. THEN they come across someone two cultivation realms ahead of them, and escape anyway. Then they come across an elder who is FIVE entire cultivation realms ahead of them, and by the grace of bad writing, escapes anyway. All of that ridiculous and impossible nonsense just to get the main character to act. And this is just one example. Half of the time the story is good, however, the other half it feels like the author is a mindless crayon eater.

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Poet_Legion
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I'm going to give a really quick summary of my review. the author takes out what is arguably the only good point in the story for over half of it and expects people to continue to enjoy. you'll understand what I mean once you get to the higher world levels the first Arc as I would call it which is the lower world cultivation is pretty good. It's relatively well done not many mistakes the tad bit of sexism which is normal in these novels but there isn't much nationalism if any at all. my problem is when we get to the higher world and our main character gets separated from his disciples which is whatever. my problem though is how hard the author tries to force it so that the main character can't meet up with which is honestly the most interesting part of the story is group of disciples. anywhere from being way too far to have soul guidance work or just straight up ignoring the main characters summons even though they're his disciples. or the main character being too much of a coward to go help out his disciple who was being captured by someone way weaker than the main character. it'd be fine if it only went on for like 10 chapters or so but it's already been over 100 chapters of the author coming up with every excuse imaginable on why the main character can't see his disciples. and that would be fine if that wasn't what made the story interesting. the main characters pretty two-dimensional he doesn't have much development and it's reasonable it's explained why early on and his personality is pretty on set. you know what you're getting from the main character and he doesn't deviate from it. the disciples are pretty interesting they come up with a lot of the comedy in the story and they make it interesting to read. getting rid of them for over what is currently half of the story is ridiculous. by the way I'm up to chapter 400 basically so pretty close to the end and he still hasn't met up with his disciples. usually I would just keep reading some already here at the end but the chapters are a bit too long to make me want to finish reading this when there's over 100 plus chapters still and I see no way it can end so soon and I also see no reason why he can't meet up with his disciples. another one of my pet peeves with this novel is how much the author makes what is supposed to be a righteous sect evil. I understand the human heart isn't true most of the time. however when you're supposed to be a Buddha the only way you should be able to cultivate that type of Mantra would be if you have a heart of goodness a heart of gold to say, if you are truly able to be a good person at least that's usually how these stories go and how it looks like this story goes. so why is it that every person in the Buddhist sect is a horrendous person who likes to either torture people for fun or doesn't mind killing Innocents because they were in the way. I understand how these novels work most of the time but it's really drawing a blank here when the author tries so hard to make almost all of them evil except for a very few portion.

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