EternalEden

This is very clearly and clumsily written by AI. The writing sounds incredibly janky and unnatural. Not trying to be rude, but with every chapter I read, I'd cringe a few times.

The story has its positives, but it's honestly pretty nonsense. MC is just born in the strongest body combination possible with zero effort. Easily finds a devil fruit, and just eats it without any thinking or research. Lucky him, it was a mythical zoan type. The MC is also a super extreme haki genius, somehow able to read minds and steal whatever knowledge he wants from someone's mind. Have I mentioned he has all this while he's only 9? I'm not a fan of just mindlessly handing everything to the MC with almost no effort. Good luck though.

No! Bad! Don't start becoming badly translated manhua trash!

The story is pretty good, but what holds it back is the fact that the author tried to "improve" everything. The whole: "I'm just like Rudeus but better" concept feels kinda weird when a reincarnator is replaced by another reincarnator. By doing everything "better" there are basically no conflicts and the story becomes incredibly dull as a result. Very often an MC who effortlessly breezes through all problems just stops becoming interesting. The in-depth power systems are cool when gone into detail, but when it feels like the entire story is MOSTLY that, it is appreciated a lot less.

Good, it's honestly annoying to keep track of every time anyway. If you're gonna constantly show stats, can you at last add a + to the changed stat?

Yeah I forgot. It's only been mentioned in the first chapter and never brought up again till now.

Okay, now this REALLY proves the MC is brainless. What if someone freed them? What if the destruction caused them to be smashed? Author giving the MC -69 IQ just to push the plot forward.

Shots fired!

Way to make it all about yourself...

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