Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Konoha Hypocrite (TL)

Not a bad story, original idea, and the speed of development is good. Most characters are very one dimensional, usually only having 1 things that defines their drive and meaning. the 3rd has be reduced to a tool box in need of quality replacements for his collection, shaving off any defining traits he had and making him just a cold hearted manipulator but thats like most FFs. The MC thinks of everyone as potential food. He wears a mask at all times, lies to everyone, and is in a prime position to never make a true friend or gf. Don't really see character growth happening at all. He has no real redeeming qualities either Despite that the story hasn't been a terrible read thus far.