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Charles_YohanesLv12mth
2024-12-23 13:25

Good. Nice story. Love to read this. Ini cerita yang bagus dengan latar belakang yang bagus. Actionnya dapat. Kisah perangnya dapat. Politiknya dapat. MC juga setara. Hanya saja perkembangan kisah cintanya terlalu lambat.

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100% recommended Although I read it a long time ago, I remember it as having a good taste in my mouth in general. The story can sometimes seem slow, with unnecessary twists, but there is no silly filler, everything triggers events that will have coherence later. The battles and the description of the scenario are my favorites, it's easy to imagine and take, however, they can sometimes be a bit repetitive if you don't have patience. The development of romance is very slow, and it can be said that the development of the MC and his surroundings are more focused. It's harem, but this etiquette will be of little importance, as I recall. The most important factors in the novel are wars, fights, and everything related to cultivation, although I don't remember much if kingdombuilding was a very developed factor, which leads to the next point. The MC acts weak, even though he is strong, and tries to keep a low profile while he and his allies become more powerful. The interactions, the dialogue, and the development between the characters is quite smooth, and consistent with the culture of the world that it is trying to capture. Although some characters seem to be brain dead, they are not, but the impulsive tone is sometimes quite remarkable and predictable. The development of the plot, yes, is slow, and a certain point can be quite lengthened due to unforeseen factors, or sometimes it is simply not what it seems. I must say that I quite liked the story, especially the intermediate development, where it is shown that the actions taken were important, however, I did not like the ending too much. It's not a "bad" ending, but it was obviously rushed, very rushed in fact. The feeling when reading the final parts are: "What used to be developed in a dozen chapters, now takes one or two chapters. What was previously explained and detailed to be smooth and dynamic, is now explained in a small paragraph ." Well, if you have patience, this novel is a good one to kill time.

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