there is one glaring issue with this fanfiction..... the reader has no idea who the m.c is. The m.c knows he has hyperstorms memories and childlike body, but we don't know who he is at all. Nothing about who he is or where he is from. From context we could say he is from our earth but thats it. We don't know if he was a she or if they had a family etc. We get no details at all about who they are at all.
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hyperstorm is son of Rachel summers and Franklin Richards from marvel. he is a super powerful mutant at least 1-C power level.
Thats not answering the question at all. Hyperstorm is not who the m.c is, the m.c has memories and the soul of another person aside from hyperstorm. I want to know that person.
SomethingMalefic:hyperstorm is son of Rachel summers and Franklin Richards from marvel. he is a super powerful mutant at least 1-C power level.
doesn't really matter who. if u want to know just look at who he is now. apparently they merged so... plus if you really want a backstory that doesn't even matter just make one up.
Chaddts:Thats not answering the question at all. Hyperstorm is not who the m.c is, the m.c has memories and the soul of another person aside from hyperstorm. I want to know that person.
Of course it matters. This is not an isekai of hyperstorm, its an isekai of the man from earth. The man from earth is who, we the reader relate to. The entire reason I stopped reading is because I can't relate to the m.c.
SomethingMalefic:doesn't really matter who. if u want to know just look at who he is now. apparently they merged so... plus if you really want a backstory that doesn't even matter just make one up.
all you would hear was : I was a 30 year old working an office job I'm a psychopath ect....
Chaddts:Of course it matters. This is not an isekai of hyperstorm, its an isekai of the man from earth. The man from earth is who, we the reader relate to. The entire reason I stopped reading is because I can't relate to the m.c.
thats such a bad, cliche backstory I would never had read this at all had that been put in the first chapter lol.
SomethingMalefic:all you would hear was : I was a 30 year old working an office job I'm a psychopath ect....
its probably what you would get.
Chaddts:thats such a bad, cliche backstory I would never had read this at all had that been put in the first chapter lol.
how do you relate to someone who reincarnated and got superpowers even if you have some backstory?
Chaddts:thats such a bad, cliche backstory I would never had read this at all had that been put in the first chapter lol.
Have you never dreamed, man? In my dreams I always imagine myself in a situation like these.
Keisar:how do you relate to someone who reincarnated and got superpowers even if you have some backstory?
ouch
SilenceMute:Have you never dreamed, man? In my dreams I always imagine myself in a situation like these.
That does matter though. It would flush out his character a lot more. If done right obviously.
SomethingMalefic:doesn't really matter who. if u want to know just look at who he is now. apparently they merged so... plus if you really want a backstory that doesn't even matter just make one up.
