Review Detail of Ruan_D_VD_Merwe in In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

Item: In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
Rating: 3.8

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I loved your novel until the mc called Hagrid a smelly professor and wanted to steal his dragon egg, it is not personal. Hagrid is just my favourite HP character, that is my reason for dropping. Note to author; you can improve your click rate by using a spell checker. not to make you feel down about writing... Your English just needs some more work. You have potential.

In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

ayrus2011

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I stand corrected, the plot just thickens and builds up more suspense. I would recommend the read if you like an original spin on an HP FF. note to author; Sorry for almost dropping... I now know not to speak if I have not given a novel a chance... [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

1yr

ayrus2011Authorayrus2011

Actually Hagrid has a more personal role in next chapters and he does meet his dragon. Do finish reading the whole chapters or you will regret missing it.

1yr

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Got you, I'll give it another go.[img=recommend]

ayrus2011:Actually Hagrid has a more personal role in next chapters and he does meet his dragon. Do finish reading the whole chapters or you will regret missing it.

1yr