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ayrus2011
ayrus2011Author3yr
2022-01-25 21:13

This is my second fanfic. Weekly update and very long chapters. It's dark and not funny or sext or anything. The MC is not a hero but anti one. Don't expect romance and unicorn thing. Peace out. Also check my other fanfic. You won't regret it anyway.

In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

ayrus2011
4.2
102 Chs

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hars_bhansali
hars_bhansaliLv2

Good job Author we really need some anti hero's

3yr
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LOF
LOFLv14

you're my guy from now on

3yr
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Sloth_King21
Sloth_King21Lv4

Great job author San. Anti heroes are the best . Don't ever change that to hero or simps

3yr
NoHaremPlease
NoHaremPleaseLv3

ant hero is cool and all but a good romance is good for everyone ahaha

3yr
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trudny1
trudny1Lv4

Same, anti-heroes are cool as MC's but some romance is nice to provide enjoyable variation.

NoHaremPlease:ant hero is cool and all but a good romance is good for everyone ahaha
3yr
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Thebestofall
ThebestofallLv2

Lastima que no hay Romance. Al menos algún interés amoroso tiene ?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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Aedan
AedanLv6

Romance? Love intereste?

2yr
1
Wolfe_pack22
Wolfe_pack22Lv14

whats wrong with you how could you leave luna the best girl i demand you change that.... lol but seriously dont leave the best girl man please

2yr
Mr_Walid
Mr_WalidLv14

are you going to discontinue this fanfiction. it's been a month since the last update

2yr
MrLeeroy1998
MrLeeroy1998Lv14

when are you going to start making more for this fanfic I've enjoyed it and I really don't want to see it stopped

1yr
ayrus2011
ayrus2011Author

only on patreon. not posting here anymore.

MrLeeroy1998:when are you going to start making more for this fanfic I've enjoyed it and I really don't want to see it stopped
1yr
MrLeeroy1998
MrLeeroy1998Lv14

Honestly, that's pretty stupid to only be posting on there Yes he may be getting paid but what about the people on here that we're getting into the story he's just going to leave them there.

ayrus2011:only on patreon. not posting here anymore.
1yr
MrLeeroy1998
MrLeeroy1998Lv14

And all pretty stupid honesty Why would you post something that people will get into and then stop to go on Patreon? Some people are getting into fanfiction now they have to go on Patreon and pay for it which is beyond ridiculous

ayrus2011:only on patreon. not posting here anymore.
1yr
Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv3

X2

MrLeeroy1998:And all pretty stupid honesty Why would you post something that people will get into and then stop to go on Patreon? Some people are getting into fanfiction now they have to go on Patreon and pay for it which is beyond ridiculous
1yr
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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

Really still Gryffindor??? You’re just following the canon and even making a bushy haired girl his romantic interest. boring. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr

Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv1

I really like the beginning and the story has potential. MC explains that one cannot become strong by learning all my spells but by affinity, and above all he has no golden fingers or system! I have high hopes for this fanfiction. question, are you going to have a romance?

3yr
OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

It's not bad. The grammar is average for a fanfic on this app, which means it's barely readable. The problem with this story is that it's entirely too bland and slow-paced. Not only the plot, but the story-telling method is very bland. The story reads like one giant summary. And what little dialogue exists doesn't provide any differentiation between characters. If the author didn't denote who's speaking the reader wouldn't be able to tell because all of the characters have the same "personality" when it comes to dialogue. As far as pacing goes, I mean we're more than 80 2,000-word chapters in and they're still in second year... so make of that what you will

2yr
Hgoma
HgomaLv4

Yay ,Edgelord Neville Longbottom Joy ,,,,,,,,,,, , , , , , , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , , ,, , , , . .... .......... .......

2yr
Dragon_forever
Dragon_foreverLv3

The story is good and everything, but there is a small problem: the author continues it on patreon, which means that you will not be able to read it and to make things even worse, if you go to Pantreon, it does not allow you to read it completely and only allows you to read up to chapter 26. something that I do not see any sense when here it is so advanced

1yr
Deisy_Marin
Deisy_MarinLv3

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

3yr
Juto
JutoLv14

Thanks, you deserve five stars just for picking this character as your mc as it has rarely been done, and when it is, it quickly dropped. Please hold on and continue....... I have enjoyed the read so far.

3yr
Am_An
Am_AnLv1

still didn't read it but i like the idea keep it up .........................,...................... ........ ..............................

3yr
Little_El
Little_ElLv3

I tried to get past the summary, I mean,Looks like he's the one specifically going to kill Voldemort without thinking about the consequence (hocrux in Potter's head) I stopped at chapter 9.the MC is too arrogant and he acts illogically, if he wants to become an assassin of death eaters, he must be discreet, with his arrogance he attracts more attention than Potter and that's a hard thing to do. He keeps showing up, catches Ollivander's attention, Dumbledore, Snape ect as if it was the second coming of Jesus He acts like Tony Stark before he got blown up. It's such a shame that I can't continue, it's the first time I've found an MC Neville. ....

2yr
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