Review Detail of WealthyRaccoon in My Hollywood System
Review detail
Completely falls short in almost every way when compared to any other hollywood themed novel. The authors initially poor pacing descends into a glacial crawl, barely covering 2 movies in over 150,000 words, with any progress towards the central plot being derailed by inane drama, a grating relationship and painful worship of the MC. An ironic comparison can be drawn from the MCs desire to not surround himself with yes men (allowing everyone's questioning of him to create dozens of filler chapters) and the authors disregard for the very valid criticism continuously leveled at them. There is such a thing as world and character building, but this novel goes so far beyond that, taking thousands of words to express what should take a hundred. Do not waste your time on a novel where the author does nothing but disrespect it.
My Hollywood System
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Criticism is always welcome, in fact that's what I want from all my readers. But to not understand what I am try to say and what's happening in the plot is only going to create frustration. you need to understand that the main character can't just go on making movies non stop, he needs to invest his time in other ventures too and establish himself as a de-facto director with a powerful production house in his control. as for the point about him not having yes-man but people who have brain and don't want mc to get ahead of himself... Well, we should not forget that only we and the mc know about the system, NOT the other characters, especially those board members who met him for the first time with their livelihood depending on his future.