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IDreamOfBeingAFish
IDreamOfBeingAFishLv23yr
2022-02-22 14:13

i've read the first 5 chapter, i'm a little disappointed because it doesn't have that thing that makes you wonder about what will be the plot of the future story, like it's just nothing.

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Hello, IDreamOfBeingAFish!! I’m sorry to hear that it kind of disappointed you at some point. But now that you pointed it out, I somehow agree with you. I think it was also my fault because I was thinking of going for a slow-paced beginning that I purposely held back on releasing some information but I think that kind of backfired instead. And now I regret it big time because I really thought I was doing a good job. Anyway, to reassure you (or more like redeeming myself), I am not a pantser writer and I already have everything outlined for the whole volume 1. In fact, I have been leaving snippets of clues everywhere already. Your comment meant a lot and I will apply that to my future novels. Unfortunately, as much as I wanted to change the first five chaps right now, it will only mess up the story later on so instead, I will make it up in my future uploads. Well, no use in me saying that. I’d rather show it than promise and disappoint other readers again. Thank you so much!! These type of comments is what I needed the most.

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Author’s Note!! To everyone who is reading this at this moment, thank you! There were a few things I would like to say before you start reading the actual story: 1. “The JOKER” was inspired by the “Lord of the Mysteries” by Cuttlefish that Loves Diving. But hold your horses people! When I say inspired, I don’t mean “copy”. Rest assured that there will be no arcana cards, tarot club, fights between deities, etc. In short, I won’t be copying LOTM’s plot, just the transmigration trope. It’s just that as soon as I finished reading LOTM, all the emptiness I never knew existed within me suddenly resurfaced all at once. I had a hard time moving on with that story that I read it over and over again. While in the midst of my painful wait for book 2, I was hit by a sudden flash of inspiration and thus, giving birth to this story. But seriously tho, why does it sound like a romantic confession? Anyway, moving forward. 2. This story is slow-paced, especially in the beginning chapters. But not slow to the point that you would want to slam your head onto the wall due to the lack of events and excessive turtle pacing. I just wanted Jack Miller (the protagonist) to be relatable and have proper motivations for why he’s doing what he's doing. I don’t want him to dive headfirst into action while we don’t even understand him as a human being. I wanted him to be relatable, not easily forgotten, and have realistic motivation. Don’t worry tho, it may be slow-paced but I don’t like putting fillers in my stories. So you can be sure that every chapter has its own purpose. (though they may be short) 3. Though I mentioned suicide in the synopsis, I wanted to clarify this to you guys. I AM NOT GLORIFYING SUICIDE. I wanted to show the effect it has on the living left behind. Also, though there will be violence in the future, the protagonist will not, and will never become a mindless murderer. If ever he actually killed someone, it is not without reason. 4. Lastly, I am not a native English speaker. But I love writing stories. It’s a form of release for me. So please don’t be disappointed if ever you see grammatical errors and punctuation misplacement every here and there. To be honest, I edit the chapter multiple times before posting them (but they become shorter whenever I do because I remove the wordy sentences). I also use Grammarly and I plan to go on premium once I become a little bit richer in the future. But for now, please bear with it guys. If you see any errors, please do a paragraph comment and tell me it needed fixing (if it’s not too much to ask). Anyway, that’s all I have to say. Thank you so much, everyone! – Your beloved bunnyrabbit.

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