i've read the first 5 chapter, i'm a little disappointed because it doesn't have that thing that makes you wonder about what will be the plot of the future story, like it's just nothing.
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LIKEHello, IDreamOfBeingAFish!! I’m sorry to hear that it kind of disappointed you at some point. But now that you pointed it out, I somehow agree with you. I think it was also my fault because I was thinking of going for a slow-paced beginning that I purposely held back on releasing some information but I think that kind of backfired instead. And now I regret it big time because I really thought I was doing a good job. Anyway, to reassure you (or more like redeeming myself), I am not a pantser writer and I already have everything outlined for the whole volume 1. In fact, I have been leaving snippets of clues everywhere already. Your comment meant a lot and I will apply that to my future novels. Unfortunately, as much as I wanted to change the first five chaps right now, it will only mess up the story later on so instead, I will make it up in my future uploads. Well, no use in me saying that. I’d rather show it than promise and disappoint other readers again. Thank you so much!! These type of comments is what I needed the most.