Writing Quality: So far that I've read, I've enjoyed all bits of the chapters. I found it hard to come across any form of error, which meant you took your time to edit your work, producing neat and organized writing. Though I almost got lost with the tenses, sometimes past, other times, present. But all in all, I loved it so far. Stability of Updates: Quite up to date at promised time! Story Development: Your story's pacing was a bit slow at the beginning but luckily, I came across your remark at the comment section where you stated the pacing was done on purpose to give readers time to connect with the MC. That's quite thoughtful of you. Actions were moderately and impressively well written when necessary. The entailed details in your descriptions were also very nice. Character Design: You took your time creating these characters with relatable backgrounds. That's very professional of you. World Background: All necessary notes were detailed in your descriptions and it transported me to those exact times. This is a great piece of professional work. I loved it so far.
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