Review Detail of Harris_Kirik in [Dropped] Reincarnated In Bleach As A Vizard
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It's not a bad bleach fanfic. It has a good potential but it's wasted on needless extra romance with extra women.... Honestly, it just need more action, less romance and it will be a lot better novel. Stick with 2-3 love interests, any more and the novel will become bland, a lot of chapters will be wasted on pointless love intrest interactions ( like dates and meetings with Reika-human girls name i think). The novel would have been a lot better without ever meeting her. I do like his abilities and how the author uses different characters Povđ To conclude, despite some of the forced love interactions, I would still recommend this novel to bleach fans. Hope my criticism and advice will be helpful to author so he can improve his abilities even further. đđ
[Dropped] Reincarnated In Bleach As A Vizard
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how are they pointless when they develop relationships and show how the character reacts to various personalities I havent read the story yet but based off of how you phrased things I've got to hard disagree with the things you listed off as being pointless. And the number of women depends on what the author is capable of if hes capable of writing a romance of over 3 then if he so chooses to he can