One piece arc was quite interesting and entertaining. But Naruto arc is rubbish, quite Unessary. In the second arc, 79 chapters are basically short inner monologues of characters or just retelling the original plot, very boring and a waste of time. Quite a shame, season 1 great👍👏😊 Season 2 (Naruto) 💩💩💩 -no offense author San, just a friendly review to help you become better. Ps. Delete Naruto arc and you can still make this novel amazing 🤩

Madara's mangekyo ability is Limbo, it is not a simple switching position with his clone...

the thing I don't like the most about this novel is: 90% of every chapter is about the description. When MC See's someone, next you have a long dialogue about that person(history and canon story). the same happens when he thinks about his abilities ( next you have to read the whole history from original story about those abilities) honestly it has become kinda ridiculous, there is so little interaction and so little change to the original story. the more I read (I'm at chapter 80) the more bland and boring the story becomes. now I just ho through the chapter's very quickly since nothing interesting happens. I Honestly can't reccomend this story, sorry author San.

this overpowered seal is killing the story. .. it went form interesting to easy mode - bot in wish Fuflliment. I want this ability, let me just touch a person and I can get all their best abilities and potential. . I mean, the seal is ridiculous and not in a good way👿👎

this sounds interesting enough. I always wondered how far can the character with the most potential go if he got serious🤔 I just hope it won't be a harem, it always destroys good stories. .. .

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Well, that's pretty fucked...

Rifan should have sent Hancock back to her ship and only heal her two sisters. That would have been the best punishment for her arrogance. I just can't imagine someone so powerful forgiving such an insult.... Shame the author couldn't resist his list and made Rifan a wimp in this chapter. 🥺

😅 what can I say, strange surname is forgotten quickly 🥸

Who is Cordato??? Wasn't his name Michael....

What, did you think he would get a decent reward from a suicide system 🤣

Your feelings are correct, this usually kills the balance of the story. Either the MC becomes too op or he gets nerfed... Either way it doesn't look good 😕

At the start, I was a bit surprised by the first drawn character since I thought it was a bit too weak, but boi did you prove me wrong author. The character was versatile with his powers and very useful at making the story balanced. The story olny become more and more interesting. I am now at chapter 109 and it's still amazing. I have read a LOT of fanfics and this one is among the best so far since the story is still interesting, MC is still balanced and keeps improving and the grammar is great. All in all it is a very enjoyable novel, it really deserves ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍

It was quite interesting until the ch 36 It become boring because, well read it and you will understand, I'm too lazy to explain.... In summary, a fun read but with destroyed potential for a long fun read 🥺 I wish you all the best author and I hope your future novels will be better and better 👍

These chapters are getting shorter and shorter.... Why are you making us suffer like this author san? 🥺

Way tooo short... We (I) need longer chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I liked all you novels so far author-san. But I have to say that this one is my favorite as of now. You have truly improved in writing quality and story development, 👍 The reason I can recommend this novel to all Naruto and one-piece fans are two main reasons: 1. The ability he got from the system is limited (Mihawk abilities and lightning chakra) 2. He only had a system for two years( novice period for training). Once he completed the transfer of the two main powers the system Dissapered (bravo author 👍) Now I understand what was the problem with all the other system fanfics. As the story continues the system becomes the bottomless wish Fuflliment well. Then the story usually becomes bad.... But you author are really a genius. A trial period system. Such a simple solution to limit the MC and balance his abilities, truly an amazing accomplishment💪💪💪 Well done, hope you complete this novel as well since I think it has the greatest potential of all of your novels. 😎👍👍👍

It started being quite an interesting novel. A fun read really.... Until the author went offroad 😒 It all started going downhill the moment MC ran away with Tylee. After that happened all the chapters become bland and boring 😑 Really quite a shame...

I have only read the first chapter, but i was so impressed by his wishes that i had to write a review. Amazingly done author, you are one of the few who was able to find the balance with the power given and the world. I can already see this novel will be amazing 👍🤩

Grammar in this chapter needs some work, especially the pronouns, they are really messed up. But the rest is good, will read more in hopes it becomes great and do the legend "archer" justice👍