It's not a bad bleach fanfic. It has a good potential but it's wasted on needless extra romance with extra women.... Honestly, it just need more action, less romance and it will be a lot better novel. Stick with 2-3 love interests, any more and the novel will become bland, a lot of chapters will be wasted on pointless love intrest interactions ( like dates and meetings with Reika-human girls name i think). The novel would have been a lot better without ever meeting her. I do like his abilities and how the author uses different characters Pov👍 To conclude, despite some of the forced love interactions, I would still recommend this novel to bleach fans. Hope my criticism and advice will be helpful to author so he can improve his abilities even further. 👍😎

it could be a good work by bleach but you wanted to make a harem composed of oc, not wanting to complain or anything but you would have more future doing a novel without being fanfic because kind of fanfic is this one that is focused on oc so i dropped it i apologize if I was rude have a good night bye

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This is not one of those reviews that just complains about something without reading it. I read about 25 chapters before dropping this book and writing this. There are a lot of problems with this book I’m only gonna list the ones that bugged me the most. LIST Below 1. MC relationships are unrealistic, unbelievable and childish 2. Writing style is weird and hard to follow 3. MC asking his system to do everything for him when he can easily do them for himself (It gets old quick when every other paragraph is MC asking his system to do things for him or ask things from it, it makes MC look incompetent and lazy) There are more but these are the major ones, for me anyway.

I dont understand the reason of author choosing writing BLEACH fanfic when he isnt interfering the main story and getting some waifus. There are so many things i dislike in this fanfic.

''well starting with the following question man only has ''c'' not even an important character in the plot basically ends up here simple you will fit the protagonist in the plot but you don't want to affect it very well I didn't read it since it's not my style we can say it will be a failure unfortunately for the following reason there is not a character that someone would be interested in your ff well ending here the best and you start from the beginning again this time adding some characters that would draw the public's attention with yoruichi, soi fon, rangiku and orihime since it's the basic and draws a lot of public your decision feel free to disagree with me but if you want public you have to write more than just "ocs" characters who won't draw anyone's attention is up to your choice and on the question of limiting harem is something that will take many readers away from your fic since 80% of the webnovel is young and as you know many like a full harem.'' ''well your story has potential but you have to think outside the box get out of the safety zone and look beyond the following of many who say that harem grande spoils ff and nonsense authors who do not know how to take the story well fail to mention some characters more if you're not one of those you'll go far I hope success for you I don't even know if you'll read all this more success there :)'' ******(I used the translator so sorry and try your best to understand that the words will probably be full of mistakes)********

This is disgusting, I only had to read the first chapter to know that it sucks, you would have simply created a new story and that's it, putting 90% oc is disgusting, it's like watching DxD with an oc harem when there are infinitely many beautiful girls, Bleach has five times more girls than DxD and you come to put only oc. Just gross and boring that ruins the plot of Bleach.

Can't say if the mc is canonically stupid or it's the author who just can't write an intelligent being, bad system, constant inconsistencies, slow story and cringe romantic interactions.

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