Loved it!, loved the characters ,good synopsis too, good grammar, great premise, keep it up I loved the first chapter and looking forward to liking more chapters that are to come.

so far i think this story is good like you obviously can't tell much in the span of 2 chapters but i think plot wise it's a pretty good story i would suggest working more on your descriptions though

There's a few chapters out so far, but the writing quality and premise of the novel are great. Excited to see what's to come, keep releasing chapters!

Its a great start and I can already see some drama ready to happen. There is only one chapter so far but arranged marriages and nobility is promising.

That was engaging! Felt like it ended too quickly, haha... But yeah, I found a little awkwardness in your writing style, which improved may prove you best! And why the 5 stars? Becoz I know you would improve your style! Keep Writing!

nothing much to judge it on now, but from the synopsis and first chapter, it has this feeling of toxicity and that's my cup of tea. good luck!

Cover photo: 5/5 Writing quality: 4/5 Character design: 4/5 World background: 3/5 Total= 4.2 ratings. Ratings will increase as chapters go by.

The story is interesting so far I just have a few issues. Description could be used much here. The lack of description is a bit of a turn off but besides that you have a good idea when it comes to the plot, I can see it going many ways. Besides this minor issue the story is good, keep up the work!

This book has potenial. My only issue is that I think you should make each chapter long like maybe 1000 words per chapter. I am looking forward to find out more about the man that wants to marry our fl. All the best!