Item: Falling For The Flaws
Rating: 4.2
Author: iam_adh

iam_adhLv23yr

2022-01-27 21:18

The story is interesting so far I just have a few issues. Description could be used much here. The lack of description is a bit of a turn off but besides that you have a good idea when it comes to the plot, I can see it going many ways. Besides this minor issue the story is good, keep up the work!

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Liked by 1 people

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N_webnovelAuthor

Thank you. I'll work on that😀

3yr

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